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Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
Definitely cleared it up!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Ice
Wow, hope it's not the end though!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:47 PM · On: Snow
I love what you have for your first chapter. Sad that she ran away, but I know she had her reasons...obviously, lol!
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Are We Different
So Riley and Bella are together, right? Are we going to get an EPOV of what he was thinking/upto during this time? What about Riley and the Cullens? Hm.... Can't wait!!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Are We Different
Absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Are We Different
Riley sounds great, but he needs a new girlfriend. Edward definitely has his work cut out for him, but maybe he'll truly appreciate her if he can win her back. He needs to know that his one-sided decisions had a horrifying effect on her. I like your story and know they can't be together right away, but please don't make us wait too long. :)
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:59 PM · On: Snow
oh em gee!! i'm like! gosh! I'm on my toes! I'm so excited to read the rest! this is off to a very promising start! And I've made up my mind to review all chapters! :D hopefully i stick to it and not get too impatient to continue reading..=D
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Are We Different
Wait what? Riley's her boyfriend right? I know I'm all for Edward and Bella being together and I'm more than a little elated that it just took one little appearance from Edward to make her see that her relationship with Riley.. "doesn't feel right" but, ahh no buts..
Oh, why does she have to act like a smug bastard? I know she's hurt and all that, but her emotions have left me reeling. Can't she make up her mind? First she's shocked and some what happy to see the Cullens, then she's shit scared, then she's all vulnerable depressed and in intense agony.. and THEN she's all blissed out from the kiss, THEN piss angry at Edward, AND THEN SMUG and SPITEFUL and THEN! ugh! she's gotta pull her act together man!
But anyway! When is the next update?!!!!
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Are We Different
Great job!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Are We Different
ooo bella, torn between 2 men...how to decide?? I'm scared if she hurts riley then things will get really bad!!! awesome story as ever!!
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Bitter
like wth??! Well, Edward kinda had that coming. But I still feel kinda bad for him. Woah and Bella? I'm not gonna lie... she seems kinda.. i dunno... um spiteful?
I really hope Edward wins her back... I mean.. hasn't he suffered enough? Ok.. i agree, it's his own fault for him suffering like that. He seems selfish too. What he only wants her back now cause she's not old and wrinkled with a gray haired bag of dust? NOW that she's a vampire, and clearly living the life they could have had, he wants to take that away because he wants it now?! "well too late buddy!"
Ok.. well... I still hope he wins Bella back... (yh i'm pathetic) but seriously! they still have that electricity thing! I really really REALLY hope they become a couple again...
Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Snow
oh em gee!! i'm like! gosh! I'm on my toes! I'm so excited to read the rest! this is off to a very promising start! And I've made up my mind to review all chapters! :D hopefully i stick to it and not get too impatient to continue reading..=D
Reviewer: dumbbrunette_2006 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Are We Different
is this going to be a edward bella story or a riley bella story
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Are We Different
Interesting story.
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Are We Different
Interesting chapter
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Are We Different
This is my question - Has she slept with Riley? I know they are a couple, but that doesn't mean she has. I need to know as I just can't read stories where she sleeps with someone else. Beautiful writting, but I need to know if I should stop reading now.
Reviewer: Prophetical (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Are We Different
My, my i actually really like Riley! I hope he will understand etc. etc. if this will be E/B story :)
Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Are We Different
I am hooked. Good story so far.
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Are We Different
new reader!!! really like this story please post again soon
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Are We Different
Interesting chapter. Liked the Riley/Bella history. Can't wait for some Bella/Edward interaction. Update soon. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Are We Different
Great chapter! I loved learning the back story on Bella and Riley.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Are We Different
This is such a 180 from the beginning, it appears that Bella and Edward definitely have some rock road ahead of them. I don't think that's a bad thing necessarily. I know that the idea of Bella having her heart broken and being turned that way has weighed on my mind a lot. It seems like it would have a big impact on her turning, IMO. Anyway, the introduction of Riley has been interesting. I haven't decided yet if I like him or not.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: twilightnewborn (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Are We Different
I was so glad to see an update this morning. I really like this story and I can't wait to see how you handle Riley and Edward in relation to Bella.
Great job! Keep it up.
Reviewer: Jeannette (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 04:09 AM · On: Snow
Wow, I never thought I'd see this story again. it's very good, but a biannual update is not nearly enough. I hope you post again soon.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Are We Different
Please write more.
Thanks for posting.
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