Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Very good. I agree with Edward, she should not be protecting Jacob, She should tell her family and friends Exactly what happened. I love the kiss, very good, gentle not overdone. Wonderful.
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Another great chapter.. :)
Happy New Year
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
I loved his reaction to her going out on the deck. Nice interlude.
Eager to see how T-day goes. LOL at what Esme's bound to do.
Thanks for the kiss, and for writing!!! ;D
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Nice kiss Eddie boy! i LIKE WHERE THIS IS HEADING.
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
awww butterfly kisses for the bella!
Reviewer: LorilieJames (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Another good update. I look forward to Thanksgiving Cullen style!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Evil brat "Cold?" He knew better! Lol.
Great chapter, nice to see them warming up. Thanksgiving should be a riot.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
I hope they don't over think the kiss to much. they should just enjoy it. Who wouldn't enjoy kissing edward
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Great chapter! Just lovely:)
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
i like impulsive edward!!
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
You have me on the edge of my seat! I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
I am really loving their quiet and intimate time together. I thought the kiss was tender and awesome!! I love both Edward and Jacob, but I am kinda pulling for Edward here. Bella needs to let her dad and everyone else know what happened with Jacob. It's not fair to her to be misjudged on something when they don't have all the information. I'm anxious to see how Thanksgiving goes with the Cullens. Thanksgiving is a time for family to come together and the way Charlie and everyone else is acting and treating Bella, being with the Cullens will be more family than her real family.
Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
This was endearing. I am so proud of Edward for kissing her! He has wanted to take the next step and really touch her for so long. I hope that Bella doesn't break his heart with her response! I loved the entire "escape plan foiled" part!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Great chapter! I loved the kiss! I wish Bella would tell everyone what Jake did. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
I love the moment by the stream. It was very intimate and I think just what they needed to reconnect. I also like that Edward won't let her blame herself for Jacob's actions. Great dialogue as always!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Ah! I'll have to follow you on twitter. Look for sandyquill. lol
I love that she's going to be with the Cullens on Thanksgiving and it is SO appropriate that Esme's making a dinner. lol Funny, too.
Very typical Bella to go AWOL. I was relieved she didn't injure herself.
The kiss was lovely. I can totally see both of them overreacting to it and freaking out and launching themselves in opposite directions... But I hope they don't!
So enjoying your story. :)
Reviewer: WorldInMyEyes (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 18 The Invitation
Another great chapter:)
Reviewer: jacobslover (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 17 Sanctuary
I cant take it....I just need to know if she ends up with jacob or edward...because I see jacobs character getting worse and edwards getting better. I don't think Ill want to continue on if she gets back with edward. I feel that any women doesn't matter the age should ever have to sacrifice everything to be with a man. So please give me some good news!
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 10 Charlie the Cheerleader
NO EDWARD-JAKE AND BELLA-HE HAD IS HAPPY DNDIN ALREADY-JAKES TURN!!GREAT STORY THOUGH
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 17 Sanctuary
Love this story, thanks for taking the time to fill our lives with more Edward!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 17 Sanctuary
Very good, I just Love Alice, She's so good!! Hopefully Mandy and Bella can remain friends.
Reviewer: LorilieJames (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 17 Sanctuary
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 17 Sanctuary
*Mwahaha* Alice! Matchmaking Pixie in action!
Great chapter. I'm as anxious as Bella to see how things go with Mandy. Will be interesting to see (I'm guessing when, not if) Jake comes to apologise/talk to her.
Gorgeous descriptions of the house and why Alice is into Fashion. Perfect!
Loved it as much as always!
Happy Holidays!
Thanks for writing!!!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 Unanswered
considering alice's vision.. I CANT believe bella even contemplated going back to forks!! Silly silly girl
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 17 Sanctuary
I like the friendship developing between Bella and Edward again. I'm sure she doesn't trust him yet but he is being nothing but wonderful. Alice helped Bella after James attacked her also, I believe. Great chapter and I can't wait as their relationship gets deeper.
Author's Response: Edward understands that he needs to support her, but balance that with the space she needs to heal, emotionally and physically.
Thank you for reviewing!
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