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Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas

what happened between them when are they going to meet what did jasper mean we need u

loved it but want some answers please

ur a very good author

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas

Wow I mean just WOW such an interesting story...what did those rat bastards do to her in south america? I would imagine Bella's tenacity will serve her well...she'll have that extraction team wrapped around her finger in to time...

 

Reviewer: budgiec (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas

Intense, well-written, and addictive describe this story.  Also frustrating, because I want to know what happened to Bella.  What is going on and why did Jasper whisper that "we need you"? I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas

I want to know what happens next. Hurry up and write it...now! Stop reading this review and hop to it!

Seriously, though, great chapter. Keep writing; you're doing a fabulous job.

Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas

Again, nice. I like the mystery behind both of them. I'm looking foreward to more. I work with toddlers, so this is my way to have a moment that isn't related to educational cartoons. Thank you for your idea.

Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas

I hope you bring in the backstory to Edward and Bella soon! Otherwise, loving the story so far, brilliant flashbacks. :)

Reviewer: anakadb (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas

hey! you almoust got me there with the burning...hahha

great story so far, I'm really excited with what might happen.

Reviewer: danarst (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas

Hmmm, what's the connection between the two? More, pls

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas

I AM enjoying so far, looking forward to finding out more about Bella's mission, it's all a huge mystery so far.  I'll keep reading if you keep writing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas

I can't wait for Edward and Bella to be reunited.....and to hear the painful backstory that Bella tries not to think of........

Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Going slightly mad

Interesting start.  Can't wait for the story to unfold...

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Going slightly mad

Write more, please! I'm enjoying this beginning and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Going slightly mad

I love it! I can't wait to see where you go with it!

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Going slightly mad

Wow... that is confusing! Like Bella, I want to know what's going on. And why on earth are they treating her like that?

Hmm... can't wait to read more, looking forward to having the questions answered. Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Going slightly mad

Can't wait to find out what happened between Edward & Bella at that hotel!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Going slightly mad

what the bloody hell just happened what happened with edward

answers please

write hast ur an amazing author so far keep it going

Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Going slightly mad

seriolusly...im hooked.  its rediculous how much im looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks... I have to admit that I'm hooked too!  But then, I know the next chapter.  :)

Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Going slightly mad

I love it already. Full of questions though which I hope you will answer soon LOL update soon please!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you like this story, it's been haunting me for quite a while.  Never fear, updates are on their way, there might even be an answer or two in them.  Maybe.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Going slightly mad

Well that was intense...I can't wait to hear the story...



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry.  That one had to be kind of intense.  More of our favourite characters in the next chapter though...

Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Fear

I like it! I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. :)

Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Fear

please keep going. i like this. very original. i haven't read many AH, but i like yours because it's different.

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Fear

Very exciting start and mysterious too... looks like Edward already has feelings for Bella, I couldn't help but grin at that.

And yup... so it begins.

Excellent work!

Reviewer: danarst (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Fear

I like this. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Fear

unique story plot, i like it. :)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Fear

Damn right it begins...can't wait!

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