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Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas
I want to know what happens next. Hurry up and write it...now! Stop reading this review and hop to it!
Seriously, though, great chapter. Keep writing; you're doing a fabulous job.
Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas
Again, nice. I like the mystery behind both of them. I'm looking foreward to more. I work with toddlers, so this is my way to have a moment that isn't related to educational cartoons. Thank you for your idea.
Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas
I hope you bring in the backstory to Edward and Bella soon! Otherwise, loving the story so far, brilliant flashbacks. :)
Reviewer: anakadb (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Waking up in Dallas
hey! you almoust got me there with the burning...hahha
great story so far, I'm really excited with what might happen.
Reviewer: danarst (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas
Hmmm, what's the connection between the two? More, pls
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas
I AM enjoying so far, looking forward to finding out more about Bella's mission, it's all a huge mystery so far. I'll keep reading if you keep writing!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas
I can't wait for Edward and Bella to be reunited.....and to hear the painful backstory that Bella tries not to think of........
Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Going slightly mad
Interesting start. Can't wait for the story to unfold...
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Going slightly mad
Write more, please! I'm enjoying this beginning and I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Going slightly mad
I love it! I can't wait to see where you go with it!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Going slightly mad
Wow... that is confusing! Like Bella, I want to know what's going on. And why on earth are they treating her like that?
Hmm... can't wait to read more, looking forward to having the questions answered. Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Going slightly mad
Can't wait to find out what happened between Edward & Bella at that hotel!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Going slightly mad
what the bloody hell just happened what happened with edward
answers please
write hast ur an amazing author so far keep it going
Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Going slightly mad
seriolusly...im hooked. its rediculous how much im looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks... I have to admit that I'm hooked too! But then, I know the next chapter. :)
Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Going slightly mad
I love it already. Full of questions though which I hope you will answer soon LOL update soon please!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like this story, it's been haunting me for quite a while. Never fear, updates are on their way, there might even be an answer or two in them. Maybe.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Going slightly mad
Well that was intense...I can't wait to hear the story...
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry. That one had to be kind of intense. More of our favourite characters in the next chapter though...
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Fear
I like it! I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. :)
Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Fear
please keep going. i like this. very original. i haven't read many AH, but i like yours because it's different.
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Fear
Very exciting start and mysterious too... looks like Edward already has feelings for Bella, I couldn't help but grin at that.
And yup... so it begins.
Excellent work!
Reviewer: danarst (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Fear
I like this. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Fear
unique story plot, i like it. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Fear
Damn right it begins...can't wait!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Fear
loved it
keep it going please
write fast
ur a very good author/writer
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