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Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Cygnet
Ooooh! nice cliffie
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Change is Hard
Wonderful
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Running
Lovely writing.
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Decompression
As always, I love it! This is wonderfully unique story. Please update soon!!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Recovery and Pain
Emmett's always fun!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas
Nice to get an EPOV.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Going slightly mad
Great job.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Fear
Very interesting!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Decompression
Another great chapter! I was very glad to see the update.
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Project Maria
Great chapter, please update soon....
Reviewer: sam41224 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Project Maria
Great story, I love a bad ass Bella. Update soon.. Please.
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Project Maria
Awesome story!!! Had to read thru to get caught up before reviewing.....sorry bout that... Can't wait for an update!!!
Reviewer: asfocd (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Project Maria
I'm hoping this is a turning point for him, maybe he will realize that he can't stay away from her that he loves her and needs her. I can always dream....
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Project Maria
wow, whatever next???
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Fear
OOOoohhh. Good start. On to chap 2.
Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Project Maria
haha alice rocks XD
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Project Maria
Thanks for the update! Nice chapter.
I loved how you portrayed Jasper as the ruthless killing machine, and then had that bit with Maria in there. The contrast was a very nice touch; very powerful, I thought.
Poor Edward, losing his edge.... :)
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Digging In
Oh, doing a great job so far and I'm totally loving it, your writing really draws one in! <3 Keep up the terrific work!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Project Maria
Can't wait for more. :)
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Project Maria
I thought for sure that Jasper was going to die after reading the warning up above! But, in the back of my mind, I was hoping that Alice would show up since Bella hadn't heard from her. Great suspenseful chapter!
Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Project Maria
that was fantastic! really I loved it. I got teary eyed when she took Jasper but was shouting when Alice killed Maria. that was awesome. keep up the great work and please update again soon. thanks bye
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Project Maria
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!! I could not be more psyched about this mission!
Not. Yours. Bitch. Christ I could not love your Alice more either for that matter. I so wanted to hit that Maria bitch but loved how you handled it. Maria will never torment Jasper again!! (Sings Ding Dong the Witch is DEAD ala wizard of oz) Bella was amazing and I hope Edward lets her in so she can help him thru all these emotions. I am floored and cant wait for more...seriously hooked...you are now one of my addictions...
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Project Maria
amazing, loved it, perfect
loved how alice said not.yours. bitch. alice saved the day, i'm so glad how everything is going can't wait for the next chapter
and quess what alice was right (never bet against alice) thngs are changing exspecially with edward and he has no clue whats going on
email if u have any ?'s for me or suggestions anything
well until next time, kayla
Author's Response: Yay!
I feel totally redeemed.
Reviewer: eakullen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Project Maria
Mmm...I really like this story! Edward is an idiot (that is to be expected though). However, I like Bella best! She is equal to everyone else on the team, not helpless anymore. Although, Jasper and his multiple personalities are most certainly entertaining. I look forward to your next update!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Project Maria
WOW. Just-freakin-WOW
THIS was awesome!!!
You SO Rawk!!
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