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Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:53 AM · On: A Day in the Life
Whoa....damn
Oh I wish he'd just jump up & grab her, and kiss the hell outta her!! Ya know he wants to! Ohh better yet--have Bella do it!
Author's Response: Yeah... that would be nice wouldn't it?
Reviewer: Nannonv (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 07:13 AM · On: A Day in the Life
I have to say that I am loving your story! I just found it a few days ago and I spend most of yesterday afternoon catching up. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. :-)
Reviewer: twilightbrunette23 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:28 PM · On: A Day in the Life
i love this story!! Are you going to post it on fanfiction.net? Keep up the great work and update more frequently :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I love your review!!
Hmmm... don't know if I will post on FF.net.... I'm kindof partial to Twilighted.
I'll try to update more frequently but my writing process takes a long time... regretably.
Reviewer: laleangel (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:19 PM · On: A Day in the Life
I'm glad that Edward is starting to open up to Bella, even if it is only a teeny tiny little bit, its better than nothing.
I'm glad that you updated, I really am interested in where this story is going and now who the mole is!!
Lookinf forward to the next chapter, Good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
I've always seen this Edward as a bit of an iceberg, you only see the very tip of his emotions.
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:41 AM · On: A Day in the Life
awwww....... what Bella did and said there with Edward was one of the sweetest things i have ever read : )
Author's Response: *blush* Thanks.
True story - I did that once with an ex that I reconnected with. We'd been dancing around it for ages until I gave up on him and manned up myself. *chuckle* It didn't work out but I'm still proud of myself for being that brave.
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 01:34 AM · On: A Day in the Life
Love it. Bella is doing a great job of being patient with Edward. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think Bella is growing up a bit (maturity wise) and is learning to be patient with others.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: monika116k (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:07 PM · On: A Day in the Life
WOW!!! I love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Fear
Wow... a mole within the organization? Ohhh who could it be? I can't wait to find out. Ohhh I am thrilled that Edward is slowly letting Bella back in, slowly but surely. Sigh, it's brilliant how you are doing it too.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:15 PM · On: A Day in the Life
This story is so good it's incredibly well written amd just draws you in I can't wait for a next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: tre621 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:40 AM · On: A Day in the Life
I LOOVE this story! I like the action and the whole operative scenarios! I think you have a great thing going here and I can't wait to read more. YAY!!
Author's Response: *blush* Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:44 AM · On: A Day in the Life
Ugh, that was so sad. Edward just really needs to start opening up to Bella and letting her in. It's so obvious that he still cares very deeply for her and vice versa.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 06:18 AM · On: A Day in the Life
wow
that was amazing loved it don't know if was my fav chapter but it was a big step
well until next time kayla
Author's Response: Hey! My most loyal reviewer!
I'm glad you liked this chapter more than the last, I was a little concerned that you didn't like it.
Reviewer: Appleslove (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 05:04 AM · On: A Day in the Life
I absolutely adore this story!! I found it just yesterday and it's one of the best I have read in a very long time! I love how they meet up at the end of the day, and the slow but definite progress... Can't wait for you to update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Hope you stick with the story.
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:51 AM · On: A Day in the Life
I always look forward to new chapters in this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review.... I'm looking forward to the next chapters too.
Reviewer: kazz68 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 03:30 AM · On: A Day in the Life
I found this story yesterday and have just caught up. I am conflicted in how I feel about it. I love the action and adventure, and the writing is wonderful. But I hate EMOward with a passion. I really try not to read too may fics where he over thinks things and make all the decisions for both of them. I realize that is how he is in the books, and yes it pissed me off there too, but at least after new moon he woke up to himself a bit. So that part of the story is very frustrating. I'm hoping that there is enough of the stuff I love to overcome my problem with Edward. Look forward too more
Author's Response: LOL - that was my biggest problem with canon Edward. I just wanted to yell at him to get out of his own head!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:48 AM · On: A Day in the Life
:( update soon?
Reviewer: deanna127 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 02:06 AM · On: A Day in the Life
Very nice. I'm glad you're not going the "rush into each other's arms" route, this is more realistic.
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 10:30 PM · On: A Day in the Life
Progress! I love that Edward and Bella meet up there at the end of the day...and that they are slowly opening up about their past together. Obviously Edward trusts Bella if he asked her to help him find out who the mole is. I'm wondering where you're headed with all of this.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 10:00 PM · On: A Day in the Life
I vote yes on the forum thread! It was interesting to see edward's composure start to crack and the jealousy bleed through. Bella's words at the end tugged at my heart because you could sense that She was voicing Edward's thoughts. This is getting better and better so update soon, please!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:08 PM · On: A Day in the Life
Who coulld be the mole? Hmm...
Author's Response: hmmmmm... *taps finger on chin*
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 09:02 PM · On: A Day in the Life
*tear*
Author's Response: *hands tissue*
(hugs)
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:33 PM · On: A Day in the Life
Wow... go Bella! She's reaching out but not beating him over the head. Even though he didn't tell her everything that happened to him, she seems to be aware that something happened to him after they parted before.
Now Mike is in the picture, even if just by mention. I am very curious on how he is going to be in this story.... is he going to take an interest in Bella? Is he the mole? He may be 'need to know' but he may know more than what they think. Interesting.... can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Ahhh... Mike the Mystery.
I'm glad that you are enjoying this story.
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 08:31 PM · On: A Day in the Life
Aw
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 07:40 PM · On: A Day in the Life
"I missed you too, Edward, every day.".....This is just breaking my heart...I so wish Edward would let Bella in.......
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: dlh32 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 06:05 PM · On: A Day in the Life
I so love this story. I get excited every time I get an update alert for it. I am a reviewer at The Writer's Coffee Shop (thewriterscoffeeshop (dot) com) and I would like to review your story. Is that ok with you?
Author's Response: Wow! I'm stunned that you want to review this for the Writer's Coffee Shop. That would be absolutely fine with me.
I'm really glad that you like my musings also.
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