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Reviewer: kittybear1217 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Just found this tonight and I am loving it so far. I am up way past my bedtime because I didn't want to stop reading. Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Awe, thanks for staying up late to read. I wish I could get you a nice, hot cuppa this morning.
Update will be ASAP.
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
nice.....i'm interested to see what her deal is!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Ruh roh! Rosalie's on a mission, and it seems as though poor Bella is the target!!! You must update soon...it's not a choice. (darn evil cliffhangers....)
Author's Response: I know. I'm evil.
Working on the next chapter as quickly as possible.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
"Perhaps she missed me as much as I had missed her, every day, every hour. The very thought of her had literally kept me alive and just on this side of sanity."....... I hope we find out soon what Edward went through. I am guessing that he was captured and tortured ..That would really screw you up on many levels.
LOVE THIS: "The touch, when it came, was so light that I wasn't sure I'd felt it. Edward had leaned back in his chair next to mine with his glass of beer in hand. His other hand was currently under the table, one finger stroking the back of my hand.'
What the hell is wrong with Rosalie? Isn't she with Emmett? is she jealous of Bella/Edward?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! It's wonderful to know which parts hit home the most.
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Great descriptions throughout. My guess is that Rose suspects something between E/B...and that maybe he rejected her earlier on, a la canon. Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MalaRom (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
I love this story. I can't wait to see more between the relationship with Edward and Bella and see what Rosalie is up to. You're a great writer; I could not get up from my computer and not finish it. Amazing
Mala
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Mala. It's feedback like this that keeps me going.
Reviewer: tinydancer17 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Completely captivating. I'm already hooked and eager for the next chaper.I just recently started reading your story, is it an older one or one that you update frequently?
Author's Response: thanks for your review. Unfortunately, it turns out that I'm one of those aweful writers that simply can't update every week although that is my goal.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
I look forward to hearing from Rosalie next chapter, this one was really nice, glad Edward's showing Bella a little bit of love!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Great chapter! I wonder what Rosalie's deal is? Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
I am loving this story! Thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
What the fuck is Rosalie's problem
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
wat the fuck is that i want more
loved it lol
please please update faster ahhh loved
loved edward and bella scenes they're getting a little heated lol
well until next time kayla
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Rosalie's mad- someone took her job away, no?
Reviewer: Squeaky69u (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Keep it coming - i only went on for a quick read and have just read all 15 chapters! The story is ace and i have to know who the mole is!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Dammit!! I was hoping it was Edward!! *frustrated sigh*
Reviewer: mamajo76 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Oh snap! whats up with Rose?
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
I loved Bella in the hotel lobby. And what the hell is Rose's problem? Can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Hmm.... what is Rose so pissed about? Perhaps she knwos about Bella's and Edward's past? Perhaps she saw what Alice saw and is worried about any attachment Edward might feel towards Bella that might disrupt the safety of teh team? Great chapter!
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Gah. I always forget how much I miss this story until I get an update!! It's practically the only story I will come to twilighted for because I much prefer FFn. *wink*
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
rosalie needs a pimp slap
Author's Response: Agreed! Can I quote the "pimp slap" in the next chapter? I'll give you credit.....
Reviewer: Cahawbalily (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
What has Rosalie got against Bella? Is she afraid that B will lead to exposure for the team?
Reviewer: _LuvTwilight_ (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Go Bella! Edward is relaxing and several are noticing. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Flight to Phoenix
Holy Fucking Hale! Will we find out what is up with Rose after all. I was thrilled with Bella going on this mission and pulling things off to a tee. I can't wait for the confrontation with Rose...please update soon!
Reviewer: sweet2nsassy2 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas
I just started reading this and so far I really like it, can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Fear
interesting start,cant wait to see where this goes
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