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Reviewer: mystillheart (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:53 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Great chapter.. always look forward to updates. I guess I can see Edward's point about worrying about the team knowing about him and Bella. As the "leader" it's kinda hard for him to fraternize when he's made it known how he feels about the other couple's pda. Rosalie would not be happy with Bella if she saw them. :(
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:26 PM · On: What tired minds can do
AT LONG LAST we're finally getting somewhere between E&B, albeit agonizingly slow. Please get us there faster. Even just a little faster? Sigh.
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:08 PM · On: What tired minds can do
*sigh* edward edward... just tell everyone and get with bella.. pronto!!lol
Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:59 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Oh Edward. Whatever will we do with you. I know he's broken, but she can help him if he just lets her! So excited, can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: mary321 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:37 PM · On: What tired minds can do
great story... love it!
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:33 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Edward needs to chillax!!!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:19 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Ugh! Two steps forward and one step back! Love your intricate little story, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:17 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Oh, I think Bella is angry for another reason!
I thought it was interesting that Edward let his guard down at that moment too. Love all the suspense throughout this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:11 PM · On: What tired minds can do
so WHO was it?? Alice? Jasper?
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:09 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Poor Edward is so clueless! Most of the team is already coupled up and they seem to like Bella... so why would Edward be taking advantage of her? They probably have already picked up on how B&E interact with one another. He is making things much more difficult for himself.
Reviewer: heathern (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:50 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Poor Bella she puts herself out there and Edward just keeps building those walls thicker and thicker
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:13 PM · On: What tired minds can do
I decided, in that moment, to allow myself to heal....this is good, but damn, his overreaction on the plane...He is so damaged! That bit of info about he and Jasper and the songs...Hmmmm.
Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:06 PM · On: What tired minds can do
Aargh! Just when he was making progress. Would it kill you to let them be just a little bit happy? I jest. This path is going to be rocky. We just have to deal with it.
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:48 AM · On: A Day in the Life
Has anyone told you today what an awesome writer you are? I ran into this story by accident, being the avid fan of Twilight fanfiction I was searching for something new. Your story line is creative, the back stories of all the participants are interesting, and the UST between Edward and Bella can only lead one to beleive that once they do get together again, it is going to be epic. I am up to Chapter 14, and Bella's admission to Edward at the end of the chapter "I missed you too, Edward, every day." is the perfect set up to move the story forward. Thank you
Reviewer: Katara97 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Turtle Mode
Beautiful.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Turtle Mode
I love this story, will we ever find out who and what happened to Bella and Edward in their separate captivities? Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Some Brief Folly (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Turtle Mode
Very glad to see an update! It will be interesting to see what Project Dig flushes out...
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Turtle Mode
I thought Eric was on the list - not Tyler? Eric, Mike & Angela. Or are they checking Tyler as a way of checking Eric?
I like that Bella's therapy is helping. Now Edward needs to get in therapy. :)
Reviewer: TattedMinx (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Digging In
If im really starves I goto pats but geno's tastes better :) im from philly so I get to eat all that stuff all the time.
Reviewer: bjelaja (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Turtle Mode
I discovered this story today and I really love it, read it in one rush. Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW I loved Remington Steel, too.
Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Turtle Mode
I love this fic. It's well written. I actually like reading about the missions they go on and not just the Bella and Edward interactions. So that means you're a good writer in my book. I look forward to the rest.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Turtle Mode
k i trust u but i want bella back and i want edward and bella back pretty soon please othere than that i loved it
i like how bella heard wat alice and jasper said about her i think she needed to hear that
well unitl next time
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Turtle Mode
I loved remington steele
Reviewer: clancy (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Turtle Mode
those words are crap but they work : )
Bella seeing Tanya - is she a good thing or will there be drama revolved around her ??
she does seem to be helping Bella so i will assume only good...
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Turtle Mode
gosh this is always so good leaving you to anticipate what comes next.
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