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Reviewer: ifka (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Yes, it means that the next chapter will be up soon and thank you for that...

Reviewer: asfocd (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

You are killing me here, I just feel like maybe just maybe these two need to catch a break and really really soon.

Reviewer: Some Brief Folly (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

I love when you update!  This chapter was hard to read.  Bella pretty much hit rock bottom, didn't she?  She was fortuante that Jasper was there.  I wonder what secrets Tayna knows?  (But of course can't share...)

 

Reviewer: Snowbored (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Hey buddy, so glad you updated, I love your story. Bit pissed, just back from the pub so v sorry no more intelligent review. Re end notes-surely they're not gonna get it on finally?

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

I am really liking this story.  Keep at it.  And yeah, if this was meant to be apart of a larger chapter that means that an update should be coming shortly.  I look forward to it.

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

yay, another update! 

I am thrilled that Bella finally told Tanya about Edward.  This I am sure will make life a little less confusing as she now has someone elses perspective.  After the little comments that Tanya made I think that she already knew in a limited way, but now that she has details she is able to help her on a deeper level.

Jasper = Hero! xxx

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

I love Jasper :-) He's such a good friend! I've never been partial one way or another to Jasper...but he's pretty awesome. And I never thought I'd say this...but I'm liking Tanya too. She kinda fixes everything. Yay. So I've reached the point where I've run out of blue "next" buttons to push. This saddens me deeply. You have to update soon! So quit reading this review and go ahead and upload that next chapter si'l vous plait!! :)

Reviewer: blueschicka (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Umm... An update soon! Loved the chapter! Poor Bella. But go Jasper for making sure she didn't disappear.

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Turtle Mode

Ahhh...I hate Rose right now. She's messed things up for Edward and Bella for two chapters now. She can be such a b*tch!! I wish Rosalie would drop her defenses & quit screwing w/ Bella's head. It'd be nice if they could actually become friends at some point. I just wish Edward would find out what Rosalie said to Bella and talk to Bella and make things better between them. ("Them" being Edward and Bella). It's just like ever since the restaurant, Bella and Edward's relationship has taken ten steps backward. Urggggg...this is killing me. Hahaha. Don't get me wrong...still LOVING the story. But...help the poor kids out! Hahaha...fix it! :) :)

Reviewer: deanna127 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

I was wondering when she was going to snap.  Very good chapter, I enjoy this story a great deal.  Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: BsuzD (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

It means your next post will be soon?

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 11:26 AM · On: A Day in the Life

Awe...I love the end of this chapter. It's so sweet :-) It's fun watching their relationship develop all over again. And YES, I would definitely visit a forum if you started one up :) (There probably already is one...isn't there? I keep responding to these reviews like they were just posted :) Excuse my tardiness! I'm still catching up) Off to read more...

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Project Maria

Holy cow...for a moment there I was sure you were about to kill Jasper. If that had happened, I might have finally had some "constructive" criticism headed your way, LOL. ;-) You about gave me a heart attack! I'm so glad our little group is safe and in tact. Dude...that was just evil. ;-) But THANK YOU for not killing Jasper...or anyone else of high importance in this story. Whew. OK...off to read :) :)

Reviewer: TheDSP (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Thank god for Tanya and Jasper. I really wanted to slap the shit out of Bella. People who assume things, and take it upon themselves to desipher other people's words and actions without actually getting it verbatim from the person themself... drive me nuts. People are complex, you can't categorize them and put them in a box. I mean, I know we all do that sometimes. But to the extent of shutting down and running away? That's not healthy.

I will be really happy for Bella when she can level out some. She is smart, and brave, and kick ass in her professional life. I hope she will be able to get the the point where she can be smart and brave in her personal life too.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

great chapter... love how tanya is hopefully a good character

Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Questions are about to be answered! I can't wait to find out what is going through Edward's head. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

"Rejection, more direct and definite than ever before, along with overwhelming loneliness moved in me and filled each cell of my body.  It was all too much."..."One by one, I focused on each thought about Edward, the old and new feelings of being pushed away and abandoned, and filed it."...This is so sad.

I'm gald she talked to Tanya and I hope that Edward will talk to Bella.

This chapter has me CRYING SO HARD!!

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Change is Hard

Hahaha I LOVE that Bella just hit Emmett. Hilarious. I must admit I find it unusual for someone to ASK for constructive criticism. There are many stories on this site/in this fandom that I've read and have enjoyed but have wanted to offer a tiny bit of constructive criticism; however, I'm always afraid of offending someone. I just find it ironic that you ASK for constructive criticism and I can't think of a thing I might ask you to tweak or change. You really are doing an excellent job with this story. I really loved the part where Edward admitted to himself that despite all the excuses he's tried to come up with, when it comes down to it, he was just afraid of how bringing back Bella back into his life would effect him emotionally. That part was key and I'm really glad you noted that. I just can't wait to see Bella's reaction when she realizes that Edward is behind all of this. My guess is it won't be pretty :) Again, I'm loving this...literally soaking up every word. You're a rock star! :-) :-) Off to read more :)

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

poor bella- what edward put them through..

hopefully you won't leave us hanging long...

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Recovery and Pain

You're taking away Hale?? How can you DO that to Bella? Poor thing...she finally has friends and you snatch them away. That's just...cruel. ;-) I'm kidding with you...but I'm going to miss Hale and Mary once they are gone! That's so sketchey of Edward to go around messing with Bella...giving her fake friends to see if she'll talk. I get that's apart of his job...but you'd think Bella's case would be harder on him considering their past. I know logically it's GOOD that's you're taking it slow with this story with not revealing information too fast - but there's a side of me that wants you to hurry up and get to the romance between Edward and Bella! I know it's coming at some point...Hahaha :-) (Obviously, don't fast forward anything as it would kill the suspense of your story. I'm just saying...you're doing a magnificant job building suspense in this story. It's just evil) :-) I'm having too much fun reading this story. I'm going to shut up now so I can read the rest!! :-)

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Argh cliffie - you'd better post soon buster!  I want to know how she gets hold of him and where they go for her to be safe and what she says and how he answers and so many other questions that I'm beginning to sound like the kid from Uncle Buck!! :)

Achilles xx

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Riptides and Undertows

It means you'd better be posting the next chapter pretty damn quickly!  ;-)

Reviewer: ButAWhimper (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

AIIIIIIII

I just read this entire story up to this point (obviously), I have been reading for hours, and I just got here, and its such a major cliffhanger! Gah. I am totally captivated by the plot though. I love the combination of excitement and lust. You have really developed all of the main characters well. Not to mention its totally believable, not that I am particularly knowledgeable about the army etcetc. The point is, I can't wait for the next update! Please let it be soon. Kudos.

-Anna

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Riptides and Undertows

Yay!!!!  This was the perfect break in the middle of exams....and I can't wait to read the next part  =)

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