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Reviewer: srogers108 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:19 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Thank you for the update!! I have loved this story and anxiously await updates. I can't believe it was Angela, even if it was inadvertantly. It was supposed to be Mike ;)! Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent, can't wait for the next update and I hope Edward and Bella can work it out and have their perfect ending (eventually).

Reviewer: bb1028 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:15 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Love this.. Can't wait for their conversation. It's definitely been a long time coming.

Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:11 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

oh, goody, goody! They're finally going to talk!
This chapter was nicely done.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:09 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Holy Freakin Hale!! That was spectacular!! I bow to your brilliance...I sure as hell hope they both work something out...

Please update SOON!! Pretty Please...

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:01 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

I think that they have a lot of things to work through, but I think that they need each other, too. There are qualities in each that the other doesn't posess, and it a little like they balance each other out. But it's going to take some work. Neither party is faultless and they'll each have to understand that. But they can be good together, and good for each other. Great job on this chapter. I can't wait to see what you've got coming!

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:43 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Oh I could just cry.  "I'll follow you where you go, Bella"  just made my insides flip!  I love that they found comfort in each other to get sleep and that Edward's body just knew that she was there and could fully relax.

Oh and Jasper - thank god for him.  He seriously did some major bitchslapping and pulled the everloving truth out of Edward - I heart him. 

I am actually glad that the mole was Angela.  I was a little bitter towards her ever since she got shitty at Alice for spending up big on her credit card!  Irriational - I know.  Edward and Emmett were both adorable towards her, and I do love that they are looking after Ben and her until they can sort it out.  Hey, maybe Bella could step into some Edward PR duties?!  That may be fun!!!

Looking forward to the update as always xxx

Reviewer: asfocd (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:09 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Crap I was so hoping you wouldn't leave us hanging here but I understand why you did.

 

I hope they don't fuck this up.

Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:48 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

woohoo!!! its about time you updated. lol no I'm kidding. I liked that chapter. I'm glad that a lot of questions I had got answered. I can't wait for their talk but more than that. I can't wait for makeup sex! lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:32 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

I am loving this story.  Thank oyu!

Reviewer: lubnayellyann (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:24 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Please update soon.. This story is awesome!

Reviewer: mreese69 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:24 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

God I really love this story updates just don't come fast enough. Is Jazz the one that put the blanket on them on the plane ride home? Also I'm glad that Edward will take one for the team. They really need each other. Oh and poor Angela.....

Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:21 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

It's about time!  YAY!!!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:57 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

oh, so heartbreaking, this isn't the first chapter that's left me in tears! Hope they make some steps forward soon! Love your story.

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:30 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Great revelational chapter! Wonderful!

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:28 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

My first thought is that I am so happy that you updated.  I have missed this story.  I hope that they will be able to at least start on the road to finding what they once had.  The UST is palpable.  If they do get together the result should be epic.  This is a unique and very interesting story line.  Keep up the good work

Reviewer: lilquackers77 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:13 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Great chapter,. Glad Jasper was able to get Edward to admit to a few things. Sad that Angela was being used liked the twist and it not being Mike.

Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:07 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

You just gotta love Jasper. He really let Edward have it. I hope that B&E's talk really gets things cleared up. It's not going to make things go back to like they migh have been before but I hope that it does help the dynamic of the group.

I still can't believe that Angela was the mole.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:02 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

great chapter

Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:49 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

great I hope they can figure this out 

Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:25 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Oh thank GOD!!! I was beginning to think these two had their heads too deep up their arses to be honest with each other!!!

Thank you Thank You!!!

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:16 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Please tell me she kicks his self-centered ass from here to Jupiter!

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Running

this is a really good story, can't wait to see where you take this.

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:03 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

Great chapter.  Glad Jasper called Edward out on his shit.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:57 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

My thoughts? Hmmmmmm ....

Strong intense emotional chapter. WOW!

Now, my strongest thought .... please please please update soon. The cliffie is killing me!

Reviewer: kazz68 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:33 PM · On: An Illusion of Control

all my thoughts are - Please update quickly :)

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