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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Club Night
*I am so excited that Edward is willing to try with Bella* This is great! The whole club scene was so much fun to read. Rose is truly a force to be wreckoned with...damn never cross her...lol
Whoa the fight was intense...I can't believe it went down like that.
Hmm sure hope Edward can calm Bella down, sounds like she is spooked probably cuz Edward was in danger. Whooo the stakes have risen!
Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Project Maria
amazing.
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Club Night
I'm dying to know what Rose said to the greasy haired creepy dude!!
Reviewer: asfocd (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Club Night
Awesome chapter, seriously. I am guessing that Bella is more terrified that Edward is hurt then anything else but this is Edward, react first, think second.
Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Club Night
Bella terrified...something else huge has to have happened!
Thanks for the update-Kate
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Club Night
Hmm.... very interesting. I wonder if Bella is terrified over Edward's injury... perhaps it is worse than he thinks it is...
Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Club Night
Oh gah...what is going on with Bella? It's not like her to freeze up like that. Ah geez you've GOTTA update!! I'm dying to find out what's going on! Loved this chapter BTW...very intense. Also loved the quick update!! Keep them coming!! Update!! Xoxo :)
Reviewer: Mortuary_Girl86 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Club Night
Exciting chapter! I cant wait to see what happens next and what Edward does to fix the terrified Bella.
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Club Night
Wow great suspense....can't wait to see if the wire works!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Club Night
"I was giving my broken soul over to Bella, hoping to find a way to heal myself in doing so. My soul would be safe with her as I tried to fix my mind."...This makes me think that whatever trauma Edward's past holds- it is a LOT worse than I have been thinking it is.
Reviewer: dlh32 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:59 AM · On: Club Night
I love this story. Every time I get an update I remember just how much I love this story. Though I wish you updated more, I rather have a well written chapter than a thrown together sloppy mess. So I wait. And my patience is reward with each wonderful update.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Club Night
I've been working on your story for two days now and just got all caught up. Really interesting premise and I'm enjoying your writing style, pacing, and especially the intrigue. :) Thanks for writing and I'll definitely keep up!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Club Night
You stopped ... that's what I'm thinking ... how could you ????? STOP??????
<deep breath> ... <just breathe> ... <okay, that's better>
Great chapter. Love seeing them in action ... but <growling now> ... YOU STOPPED!
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Club Night
Your chapters get better written with every installment. I love the way you moved the plot in this chapter on so many levels.
Reviewer: ElisabethDanoff (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Club Night
Loved the update...a lot. Your plot line is so sharp. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Club Night
I was wondering where Bella was during the fight. Looks like fighting still triggers something in her? I hope she'll be able to take care of Edward like he needs her to if he's going to let her in, and the demons out...
Hope to see you again, soon.
Spikey
Reviewer: iggy2746 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Tapas
I love this story .It is well written, keeps me waiting for the next chapter. It's refreshing with a plot that's not all about sex,not that i mind them there are just an aweful lot of them. Keep up the good work your great.
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Club Night
That was INTENSE! It's amazing just thinking about how one would react in the same situations that each of your characters is put in by each mission. I'm not sure I could handle it :S
I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bakerusaf (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Club Night
Little white box, please tell the author that I love this story. thank you. lol
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Club Night
Whoa...
Awesome. I love it when the whole team is involved
But why is Bella freaking out?? Is it from the club? Watching Jasper? Or seeing Edward go down?
Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Recovery and Pain
I love where this is going!
Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Waking up in Dallas
2am and I have to read the next chapter. well done!
Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Going slightly mad
instant addiction... just like this story.
Reviewer: depper57 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Club Night
Great chapter! The action, and their teamwork... makes me want more!!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Club Night
great chapter
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