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Reviews For Last Rites
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Hurt By The Cold

THIS IS AGREAT STORY - ITS JUST STRANGE - BELLA REALLY HAS NO SELF PREVERSATION DOES SHE

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:16 AM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

That was a great chapter-I loved the gallows humor!  And did Edward consciously use the term "pops" for Carlisle to mimic what Bella called her father?

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:09 AM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

Wow, this story is awesome.  I haven't read the little Prince since high school.  I'm going to give it anotherread.

Great writing, great characterization...

Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:28 AM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

This story is soooo good-- touching, witty and very well written. Definitely checking for updates, cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:25 AM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

He's trying to acclimate himself to her scent.  Good... I think.  I wonder how many people he's killed.  Heaven knows what Carlisle is thinking right about now.  Bella is way too trusting in some ways, but on the other hand I believe she recognizes that if he wanted to hurt her he easily could and there's really nothing she can do to prevent.  Could she be thinking "kill him with kindness" or something like that?

Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:59 AM · On: I Don't Belong Here

this is awesome!! great chapter, love the ending!

Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:25 AM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:15 AM · On: I'll Show You My Dark Secret

WOW - SO IT WAS EDWARD ALL THE TIME - I WENT ON A DATE ONCE WITH A GUY THAT I MEET AT A BAR - FOR HALF THE DATE I DID NOT KNOW HIS NAME.

I HOPE HE DOES NOT KILL HER - HOW CAN THEY EVER BE TOGEATHER AFTER THIS - HOW CAN SHE EVER FORGIVE HIM - WHERE THE IS ALICE TO STOP THS?

Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:07 AM · On: No Rest For the Wicked

ahh! I was totally fooled. No not James!!  Great writing, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:58 AM · On: No Rest For the Wicked

WHAT? JAMES? WHY?

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:47 AM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

i am loving this story. its now my favourite. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Hurt By The Cold

Frickn awsum. I am loving this!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:57 PM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

First...pure genius, bringing in The Little Prince.  Absolute brilliance.   *applause*

 

Terrific chapter, of course. This presentation of Edward and Bella is outstanding in the bare bones of it.  I love that he has her pillow.  I think it's just amazing that he reads for her in celeb voices to entertain her. How incredible is that? Not the ability, but his willingness to do so just floors me. 

And of course Carlisle's concern is pertinent.  Will he get to meet Bella anytime soon?

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:48 PM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

I just love your story...it is so intelligently written.  I love how you're taking the quotes and interpreting them in a different way, and I love seeing the progression of their relationship. 

The Little Prince is an awesome book--I could totally see how it applies here. 

Reviewer: TransylvaniaOrange (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:07 PM · On: No Rest For the Wicked

Your story is really engaging.  I'm hooked, to say the least.  I like this Edward and Bella better than others I've read.  They seem to be fuller characters.

Cheers.

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:59 PM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

this story has utterly captivated me

Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:58 PM · On: As Soft As Your Pillow

very good, thoght provoking dialog. Please keep it commong

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Hurt By The Cold

I LOVE that he took the pillow.

Reviewer: kitty2 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:42 PM · On: No Rest For the Wicked

I love your story. Poor Edward's so confused by/obsessed with Bella. Anxious to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Hurt By The Cold

I'm really enjoying this-please continue PLEASE

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Hurt By The Cold

oh my,i found yet another story to love.

:)

this confused edward and amused bella...zhe best part is when she remembers how he kicked that stone. i can totally picture it in my mind.beyond precious. ;)

Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Hurt By The Cold

I just read straight through to chap 5, and am really loving your story. Very strong and interesting take on twighlight. I have laughed and cried throughout! And I am hooked on every sentence, when I usually just skim fan fictions to see where they are going and if it's worth my time and effort. Definately a story I will be eagar for updates on. You are a very talented writer!

One thing I don't get is why Bella uses such vulgar language at times. Is it to show that she is toughened by her experience with death? Eg; When she was saying she'll F with his head, she didn't seem really mad though. I read it as 'mess' with him, and the same emotions were portrayed to me. Am I missing something? lol

Reviewer: StephanieDeShaw (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Hurt By The Cold

I really love where you're going with this story. Keep up the great work

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Hurt By The Cold

Good chapter.  Edward is working overtime trying to keep "it" at bay and save Bella.  But it also sounds like they are building something together.  They can talk and joke with each other.  So that is a start.  Still wondering where the story will lead so update when you can.

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Hurt By The Cold

Hehehehe. awesome chapter. i love how edward took the pillow.

update soon!!

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