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Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Ohhhh what a tease!! The cabin sounds lovely.
Reviewer: starrie (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
So frustrating!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
i hav edelighted in every word written here your beautiful tale of love has a warm sensual side but i enjoy the little side jokes and teasing that went on betweeen our favorite charcters i am glad you realive the importance of post in a timely fashion people like my self have full and busy lives and we enjoy fan fiction but it is very hard to stay with a great story when the updates are lacking when its be along time between chapters you have to go back and reread alot sometimes its hard to do thank you
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
They finally are at the cabin; it seems like we've been waiting for this overnight stay forever. I love that birth control just came up in their relationship. What a guy thing.
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
They may not have got down to business, but I loved this chapter none the less. They love each other, and it's nice to see them show it - and to see them be playful together.
But of course I'm looking forward to next chapter!
Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
alice?! she better be gone - unless she has a powerpoint presentation on how to get things done that she is going to present! thanks!
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Aww come on, why did you stopped there? Please post soon!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
What lovely toasts! I love how Edward is opening up to the possibility of new experiences with Bella. I'm interested to know if Carlisle will do the test to see if Edward has swimmers or not...Bella's gonna want to stay on the Pill!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
EEEEEEEEE, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure I'll have a longer review for you then.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Now that was just plain mean. !
Reviewer: siriusyellowlab (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Arrrrrggggghhhhh! You evil pixie! Oh well. You've been very generous today, so I forgive you. I really love this story, and was so thrilled to see it had updated. You've been so busy with your two wonderful stories. I'm such a fan.
Anyway, I think Edward in this story is so humorous. I love his little commentary to himself. Priceless.
Reviewer: wordplay (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
You are a horrible person!!!
But in the best way possible hahaha. Said with mucho love for this story and you, promise. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
smb.
xo
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Great ending another cliffhanger. You lead us to the brink and then stopped. So waiting for the next chapter to complete this wonderfully romantic weekend. The hot tub is already turned on, candles lit throughout the cabin, and Bella tipsy and relaxed. What more could Edward want or need to succeed in their mission. The boat ride on the lake and picnic lunch was lovely. Edward made the most endearing toast to Bella. Bella was nice, but Edward just has a way with words to make every woman swoon. Love and romance just ooze out of him. Makes the heart beat a little faster, the breathing to quicken, and the brain imagining many activities to occur.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
just love it
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Don't stop there!!!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Ok, while I loved this chapter, I REALLY wanted it to keep going!!!!! You are an evil woman, but a very talented one. Edward getting Bella drunk. Love it!! I know you have a treat waiting for us so PLEASE share it soon. Don't make us wait. I hope Christmas comes early. You are the bomb
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Great chapter! Definately post the next chapter soon or I'm going to go insane. You don't want that on your conscience do you? Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: stephieleigh (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
NO! You're such a tease! Great chapter anyway. I loved their toasts to eachother, very sweet. Please update soon!!
Reviewer: Agonz (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
aww i really thought there was some action--
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Excellent chapter!
I'm looking forward to what is going to happen next! I have a few guesses on what might happen, but I'm not quite sure....
This entire chapter was excellent! Great job!
Looking forward to your next chapter!!!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Gah! I should TOTALLY be doing something else right now! But everytime I get an 'update' email I can't seem to do anything productive until I read it!
Very nice dear :) They are SO sweet and sappy! ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: minnie82 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
ahh big tease hahha but i love this story thank you :)
melissa
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Cabin Fever
Very nice........
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Peeping Tom and "The Talk"
cant wait for next chapter :)
Reviewer: starrie (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Peeping Tom and "The Talk"
Can't wait to see what happens at the cabin!! Keep the chapters coming!
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