Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 7--A Day at the Springs and an Unexpected Request
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: cullenlover2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Great chapter! I wonder if Bella is pregnant? Birth control pills may not work with Edward...that's probably why she is so unsually cranky. I'm a vampire for fuck's sake. Humans fear me. I could break someone in half with my thumb and fore finger. How can one small human woman play havoc with my emotions so severely? I cracked up when I read this! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Firsts...
Great chapter. So looking forward to going to the springs next chapter. Loved Bella's jab at Emmett about crying.
Reviewer: Sparkels45 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Really good story, but I was kinda hoping the reason he was so cranky was because she was pregnant and was scared to tell Edward.. Are you gonna make Bella pregnant? Though that would put off having her changed for 9 months.. Anyway! Love the way there acting like a real couple for once! Keep it up:) xx
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
hell edward is a vampire..it was to be expected, and its not that gross!
Reviewer: silverelvis (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
i cant believe people get up set about stuff like that,
keep writing your great story!
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Blondie here will rip your cock and balls off.....ROTFLMAO that was awesome
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
loved the chapter. :)
Reviewer: Topazlover (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Very well written, poor poor Edward! Loved the tent scene by the way. Not gross at all, people SHOULD NOT complain because they were warned in the Author's notes! It's your story, write what you want! Can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 -- Girls Night Out
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
FIRST OF ALL HE IS A VAMPIRE ANY ONE THAT PISSED OF ABOUT THE BLOOD SHOULD NOT BE READING VAMPIRE FAN FIC!
I FOLLOW AOVER A 100 STORIES THIS WAS MILD - TRUST ME
DO YOU HAVE A FORUM - CUZ YOU SHOULD THIS IS A GREAT STORY
AND FUTHERMORE I LOVE " THIS MAKES NO FUCKING SENSE ... I SHOULD SKIP DINER AND GO DO SOMETHING ELSE TO TEACH HER A LESSON. I'M A VAMPIRE FOR FUCKS SAKE. HUMANS FEAR ME... HOW CAN ONE SMALL HUMAN WOMEN PLAY HAVOC WITH MY EMOTIONS SOS SEVERELY" I ALMOST FELL OF MY SEAT LAUGHING SO HARD - THAT HAS TO BE THE FUNNIEST THING I HAVE READ IN A WHILE!!!
THE FACT HE WANTS TO CHANGE HER QUICKER BECAUSE OF HER PERIOD MOOD SWINGS CRACKED ME UP!!!!
YOU NEED A FORUM!!!!!!! OMG THIS WAS AWSOME!!!!!
TAMMY
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Is Bella pregnant? Did Alice go to the store for a pregnancy test? I know she's bleeding, but some women bleed during their first trimester. Not to mention that her "period" is early. I know she's on the pill, but obviously Edward's little swimmers would have super strength. Ok...maybe I'm just reading too much into it, but I kept having prenancy thoughts the whole time I read this chap. Hell, maybe I'm pregnant!! ;) ...too bad it's not Edward's...:( Anyway, great chap!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Not pissed about the blood at all...He's a vampire, what else can you expect!! Bella the bitch was hilarious. I felt so sorry for poor Edward. Nice long chapter, thank you!
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
In that case, I don't see a problem that they had sex when it was her period - he is a vampire, for God's sake! Of course he'd get turned on about blood on that area!
But, as humans, I do find it disgusting - I wouldn't do it, but I'm nobody to tell writers/couples that they shouldn't do it.
Anyway, I want another chapter ASAP, ok?
xoxo
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
I loved "crazy hormonal Bella", it reminds me of myself (which is unfortunate for my dear, patient husband). I found it to be too true and quite a hoot. Very good, quick update, thanks a bunch.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
This chapter was great! And to answer your question, no the blood didn't freak me out. You wrote that scene very well. It wasn't too descriptive and it wasn't non-descriptive Good job. :)
I thought for a moment that Edward wasn't going to go to Charlie's. But, he did and it was all good.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Such a deliciously long chapter, I loved every word of it!
Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
I think the blood part was great. Edward is a vamp for pete sake of course his is going to want a taste once and awhile, it's perfect.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Hey no problem, its reality!!!! LOL
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
I liked it..it showed a different part of Edward/Bella relationship...the blood scene was well written(not gross at all) and not the most important part of the story..Thanks for another wonderful chapter
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Actually, the blood issue seemed like a pretty normal one, given that one of them is a vampire. Obviously, it would be something he'd want to try! Poor Edward, though, with Bitchy Bella. I hope she got that out of her system.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
wow bella is certainly ooc didnt know she could take her temper out on edward so quick lol
Reviewer: butterlfybetty (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Paging Dr. Swan
OMG I loved this chapter. I laughed so many times:)
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
the blood issue didn't bother me at all. It makes perfect sense all things considered and if Edward likes it then I do too ! :)
I don't know why people would complain- he's a vampire for goodness sake lol
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