Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
RICK???
Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
LMAO!!! I love it! These two are so much fun when they are playful!!!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
i feel like Bella and Edward have both seemed to grow into themselves...So at first the story was kind of about Bella seducing Edward now that that has happened Im not sure what is the plan for the rest of the story? i completely enjoyed the story so far and am looking forward to the rest of story so im curious how many chapters do you have planned?
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
Great chapter! Seeing Edward jealous is funny. He should know he has nothing to worry about. I definately wouldn't mind having a naked Edward in my kitchen right now. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
this was a fun and light chapter! I think you did a good job at leaving us wondering who Rick was.....and I am anxious to get Bella and Edward together ina school setting/atmosphere.....where people can see them together! That will always raise an eyebrow or two, or three!
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
*LOLZ very loudly* I will never get tired of Edward talking to himself like that.
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
I laughed so hard at the cheerleader outfit that I almost fell out of my chair! I loved this chapter!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
THAT WAS GREAT - THEY ARE SO CUTE!!!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
Great chapter!
Their married life is awesome so far! =)
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
I love it when he says yippee! lol
so, I've decided that I'm gonna marry a horny Edward. What do you think?
post it soon, please
xoxo
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
intresting poor Edward home alone. yummy ending!
Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
They are very cute as the married couple going to college.
I like Edward's thoughts. They are very funny
Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
you kill me... i love those two... thanks
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
damn....ok please can i have edward waiting for me when I get home form college everyday??? please??? that was hot!
Reviewer: cullenlover2 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
I loved this chapter! It's great to see Bella and Edward's new life at Dartmouth. I can't wait to find out more about Rick. I wonder if he is another Mike Newton! That would be funny!
Reviewer: Kataleena (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
Heh, that was total win. The June Cleaverward mental picture was pretty much the funniest thing ever and I adore roleplay Bella.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
Sounds like Bella had a great first day. :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
College life for these newlyweds is going to be so much fun!!! Hmmm...wonder who "Rick" is? Doesn't matter....no one is hotter than Edward!!! :)
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 29 - School Daze
Haha! Fun ending :) Sounds like everything is going swimmingly for these two lovebirds. Can't wait to learn more about this 'Rick' character! And I hope you give us a little more with the new outfit!
Reviewer: TraciSnow (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Afterglow...and Aftermath
love this story. i cant wait to see what happens next. i just hope that when she is turned that she still surprises everyone with her super control and not having to wait for years to want to be with her husband again. and in my opinion, there can never be enough sex when it involves edward cullen, especially if he looks like rob. mmmmmmmmmmmm..........
Reviewer: joy mattox (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Company's Coming...Not in That Way
I LOVE your writing skills. SM could have taken a few pointers from you and I'm not just talking about the visuals but the gaps you filled in "nicely." It's been a lot of fun following the weeks up to the wedding which seemed to be missing from the original. I've have laughed myself silly, gotten pissed off and all 'worked up' too right along with the characters. I can't wait to read more and almost feel like I don't want it to end. GREAT Job!
Keep it coming!!!!!
Reviewer: kelliwelli (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 -- Girls Night Out
I would love for the restaurant scene to be in "Breaking Dawn"! How hilarious would that be to see Edward eyeing down another man. Good job!
Reviewer: araye13 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Paradise Found
hahaha i loved the 'you get back in there and lets do this!!!'
too funny....loving this story! :)
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Afterglow...and Aftermath
That list was soooo funny. I live Alice's quip about the size of Carlisle's damage check.
Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Afterglow...and Aftermath
fun chapter to read.
I laughed alot
look forward the the next chapter.
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