Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Party It Up!
Why the freak would anyone be upset about the blood, um reading a story about Vampires who drink blood.... So they are going to freak from what part of the body it comes from??? I think it is sexy and you could have gone in to more detail ... Jut my thoughts...... Love this story !
Reviewer: wendemyre (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Paging Dr. Swan
I Love this story !!!!!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
I hate that this ending! cant wait to see how you work things out!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Happy Hour
wow, great chapter - Ewdard is such an ass, now he does not want to turn her . She is going to be pissed
Reviewer: heavenlyvixen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Always love Emmett, he's brilliant and not appreciated enough in my humble opinion, so I love that you threw him in there. :D
Can't wait for more... but I'm really hoping you don't have edward chicken out on changing Bella. That would not be cool.
Update soon. :D
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Happy Hour
No! No storm! But dayuummm, Cecily was a bitch and I am glad her ass got handed to her by Bella, Rick and Edward. Nice. Great chapter!
Reviewer: pattsylove (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 5 -- Girls Night Out
God love Esme!
Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
OMG I love your Bella....she is bitchy, strong and a smartass...LOVE IT. My favorite line "If you can't get along with Em, Edward, I promise you, my legs will not open before December twenty-fifth, just like your Christmas gifts."
Reviewer: lindsayrae (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Yay! Update! Rosalie and Emmett are always hilarious. It was fun to see them on Edward and Bella's turf. Can't wait to see that Christmas present go to good use ;)
Reviewer: pattsylove (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 4-Unwinding the Spring, One Coil at a Time
'Talk faster...she still looks pissed' BEST LINE I'VE EVER HEARD!!! Oh poor Edward and his cock, he got no play time, but at least Bella did.
Reviewer: pattsylove (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3-Desperate Times and Desperate Measures
I can't beleive he asked his entire family for help. OPEN family. Wow. Great chapter!
Reviewer: pattsylove (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Let the Games Begin
GOod for Bella, playing his own game against him. That'll teach you Mr. Hard On!
Reviewer: pattsylove (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Esme's Advice
Oh Gosh, that was awesome, funny. Poor Edward having to hear about the rents sex life!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
i thought it was a great chapter!...........every chapter can't be all lemontastic...you gotta have a plot line!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
i liked the chapter, i didnt even realize this chapter was lemon-free til you mentioned it...thanks for the update..
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
funny chapter....I love me some Emmett.....
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
I loved that Rose and Em came to give them a hot tub. I just love Em, he is just so funny.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Okay, just how long do we have to wait for this coversation between Edward and Bella about his not wanting to change her?
Bella is going to flip out and Edward will mess up the best thing in his life if he doesn't grow a pair and change his wife!
Please don't keep me in suspense much longer!
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Nice family interaction. I just really enjoy Emmett.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Bella getting to drive the Astin. Boy, I'm jealous. I would love to drive that car. I can't blame Edward for not wanting to drive his beloved car into downtown Boston. Great surprise to Edward to come home to Rosalie and Emmett visiting. Wonderful Christmas gift to Bella and Edward a huge hot tub. It will be a nice relaxing way for Bella to unwind after yoga for her joints and her soul. Soaking in a hot tub is also great for lovemaking. Rose was something telling Bella Emmett left her for Tanya Denali. I can't believe that Bella actually fell for that act. Bella is happy in New Hampshire being human. Edward loves to see her excited and bouncing around with joy. He even enjoys the stumbling around as well. Bella doesn't like being clumsy. Really funny about Bella worrying about a guest room for Rose and Emmett since they don't even sleep. If the boys get the water line hooked up they'll probably be in the hot tub all night anyway. Really upset that the story is coming so close to finishing. Thoroughly lovely different ending to Breaking Dawn. More realistic to what type of life Edward and Bella would have had at college. Since Edward and family paid so much to get Bella accepted into Dartmouth. The waste is terrible. I know they have more money than Fort Knox, but it would have been great for Bella for 1 semester or two.
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
I still say that Edward REALLY needs to ask BELLA is she wants to be changed.
I think she still does but hey...we havent had a BELLA POV yet to comfirm this tidbit
Love the emment edward banter...hilarious
rach
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
I was scared something was going to happen while he was gone...especially when Bella took some time to get home. Glad everything was happy and fun!! Enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
I am not liking this whole edward "not turning her himself" business. I wish you'd get over this. Especially if there's only 3 chapters or so left!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
Sounds like they've all been busy! Nice to see a little more E&R. A hot tub is an awesome gift!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Over the River and Through the Woods
i love emmet!!
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