Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Let the Games Begin
HA! This is getting good! That's the perfect way to get him to cave! Bring him to the edge and then take it away!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Esme's Advice
That's awesome! I love Edward's thoughts along the way. He is SO screwed now!!! And, not to sound pervy, but I like hearing about Carlisle and Esme like this. It is easy to forget that they are probably just as sexual as everyone else.
Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
TEAM EDWARD all the way! :) Nice chapter edition... keep up the good writing.
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
well THAT was A lovely LITTLE triste! Glad I stumbled upon it and it has now been neatly tucked into my favorites, thanks for the errrr inspiration :)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Ooh, Bella's playing dirty! Good for her. That was some BJ...looks like she's a fast learner, lol! Rose would be proud :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: vivian123 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
i loved it please update soon
Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Go bella!!! Great chapter hon! I love that jacob imprinted and she seems like a pretty cool character. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Amazing!! update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
wow, damp panties all round loved it
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Damn! I love it and yay for jacob, i'm with you on the team edward front, jacob is lovley, but edward and especially naked edward is well soo much better! I love fiesty bella too!!!! need more! need more!!!!!!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Ooooh, so sorry to see this chapter end! That Bella, she's twisted! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Wait, I thought she wasn't wearing a bra and panties and then she put them back on? Did I miss something? lol
Bella, ah, yes. Sex is a woman's most precise weapon, I think. I don't always agree with using it as such, but... in the short term... it can be effective. ;) Hope it doesn't backfire on her!
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Love your story!
Looking forward to more chapters :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GREAT
Again, why can't he be real
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Oh yeah, I'm team Edward all the way also, especially with his freak on. so please continue in this vein--I can't wait to read of his continuing punishment.
Reviewer: tigeress (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
thank god jake imprinted lol TEAM EDWARD all the way lol that was just a good chapter wow go bella
love T
Reviewer: jellycatty (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
me too! i LOVE an edward that's getting his freak on :P plus you slipped in a little of freaky carlisle too, mmm well done
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 -- Crime and Punishment (Part I)
Great chapter!
I think Edward is going to learn a lot from Bella's wrath.
Jacob imprinting is cool. I'm glad I don't have to worry about him messing things up for Bella and Edward.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
Bella does have a temper...but not really I mean if it was something buliding up for awhile, then I would have snapped too :P
great story!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
Looking forward to the making up!
Reviewer: shishishi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
this is do funny! i love Bella's temper! my favorite is when Alice stomped out of my room and slammed her bedroom door before thinking, “Don’t fuck up her hair or I’ll have your dick as a trophy.”
that was the best!!! keep it up!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
Whoa on Bella flipping! Can't say I blame her though...Eddie and Alice were being very demanding of her time. I'd probably do the same thing!
Good work! :)
XOXOXOXOOXO Jess
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
I'm so glad to see Bella standing up for herself! It has to be difficult for her being a fragile human in a family of strong, immortable, unbreakable vampires, but she has turned out to be a force to be reckoned with. Go Bella!
I thought it was cool that she could both laugh about her truck being destroyed and telling Edward she wants his Volvo. Again, go Bella!
Now let's see if Edward can keep his nutsack undamaged...
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
“Edward here, got the wild idea to whisk you off to Vegas to marry you tonight so he can fuck you properly,” LOL!!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - A Night on the Town...and a Major Glitch in the Plans
Go Bella! Things the dynamic duo needed to hear.
*giggles* Love her choice in cars, and it's not one he can complain about because he drives her in it all the time, so he knows it's safe enough.
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