Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 5 -- Girls Night Out
Hell yeah, Esme! That was so funny! Carlisle reaction was priceless!
Good next chapter is already here. I will go get a glass of red wine...
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 4-Unwinding the Spring, One Coil at a Time
I think it is really funny when Bella has these explosions of temper and puts her vampire in his place. He is totally wrapped in her little finger! :)
But Edward learns quickly, huh?
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Let the Games Begin
Oh my!! I've seen enough! Going to my favs now!! :D
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Esme's Advice
ahahaha! This chapter was so funny! Bella must be really desperate because she didn't seem shy at all. Oh well, desperate times, desperate measures.
Thanks for the chapter :)
Reviewer: MOMMASANGELS (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
I love the story bella being a tease edward having a perverted mind this is great can't wait for the rest of the story
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
I love this story and can't wait to read more. I love an assertive and confident Bella!!! And Edward is positively adorable!!! I also have to give you props for not making Jacob an issue...I am kind over that whole triangle! Keep up the good work and hurry up with more! I'm impatient and greedy! =)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Whew, I like your horny, not-so-repressed Edward! Great chapter :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
please hury up and get the next chapter up this is great stuff
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
GOD THAT WAS JUST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!
LOVE ALICE AND JASPER!!!!
CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 3-Desperate Times and Desperate Measures
i love wat uv writen here
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
ooo i love it!!!!!! wicked wicked thoughts and i love sexy edward...mmmm! :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
i loved this chapter!!! I love your depiction of the characters!!! They are so light and fun loving!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
"Damn, I made her come so hard she passed out. I must be quite the cocksman... Shut up, stupid." LOL!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
hahahahahaha!! love the ending.
update soon!!!!
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
more like 100/100 but it only goes up to 10
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
What an incredible chapter!!! I can't wait to come back!!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
yummy I loved it lol. That was awesome. And you don't have to worry about me going away lol...Avid reader here. I loved Jasper's idea...and saucy Bella is awesome!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Wow, that was a very hot chapter!! Very nice and worth the wait for sure!!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Thanks for updating! :-)
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Oh, that was very good..very sexy. I really liked it And it seemed he had no problem with his control. The blood lust was only mentioned early on but didn't seem to appear while they were enjoying each other. I'll be back!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
She is going to drive him absolutely crazy. LOL
Jasper had a wonderful idea. He's a smart smart man, and Edward was even smarter for taking his idea.
Reviewer: ForThe Love of Edward (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Totally worth the wait! I can't wait for them to stop being good and careful! I have to admit I was secretly hoping he would accidentally slip inside... they could do that without breaking the hymen yeah?? Anyway, great job!!
Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
I enjoyed Charlie's reaction. I'm impressed Edward didn't say anything about the dress+ thong combo when he knows some of the pack are visiting later- I guess a vampire can learn.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
THIS WAS A GREAT CHAPTER
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Jasper's Great Idea
Great chapter. Edward gets go ahead from Alice and advice from Jasper. It worked very well for both of them. They are gonna get caught by Charlie if they are not more careful. Edward's concentration is strictly on Bella and what they are doing at the time. He bearly made it down to the couch before Charlie showed up. Charlie is letting them sleep together, that's new. Good idea to cover Bella. Alice giving everyone what happening during the day. New washer and dryer arriving in the afternoon. Alice, Rosalie, Esme, and Bella's ideas are going to kill Edward. His control is there, but the temptation to not wait is there for both of them. At least they are both enjoying the practicing. Looking forward to the remaining 11 days before the wedding. That's if Bella and Edward can maintain their control.
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