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Reviewer: xxDevil18xx (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

Oh! This sounds really good, I can't wait for the next chapter. Im sad that Jake had to die but I think it was very heroic to sacrifice himself for Bella and Seth. Im glad Seth is their son too, He's a hot shit--pardon my potty mouth, but hey you get used to it. I wonder how Edward will meet Bella, it has to be original, like oh oh maybe Bella can get hit with a baseball and will be taken to the hospital and Edward will be her docter. Yea, that sounds embarrassing enough.

Im so happy Seth survived, when I read the summary  I was afraid the son would die but thankfully he didn't. I can't wait for the next chapter and if you want more people to read your story let me suggest fanfiction.net many writers on Twilighted have stories on ff.net and it brings more people to read it, plus you can update faster.

Good Luck with the next chapter, all my love- Andrea



Author's Response:

Thanks Andrea!!

I'm working on this story as fast as I can.  It just seems to be flowing.  But, I don't know how often I'll be able to update.  Hopefully, I'll write quickly!  But, it has to be told just right. 

I have a soft spot for Seth.  After BD, I just loved him.  So, even though he's not a teenaged werewolf, I had to have him as part of this story. ;)

The first meeting between Edward and Bella will be awkward, but not quite as embarrassing as a trip to the ER...  It comes in chapter 2 - which is already written, I'm editing right now.  Although, with Bella, she's bound to end up in the ER at some point.

I'll probably post this on ff.net soon.  I have a couple of stories there already, so it's a great idea!

 

Thanks again!!

 

Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

I have a feeling that this story is going to be a little hard for me to read.  I lost my husband 11 months ago today to a car accident. It is very tough.   I really enjoyed this chapter, and I am looking forward to your next update. Take care!



Author's Response:

I can't even begin to tell you how sorry I am to hear about your loss.  There aren't words. I'm amazed that you read this chapter - it had to be extremely painful.  That is a loss that I can't fathom - scares me to try.

I would understand completely if you didn't continue to read my story.  There will be a few more memories of the accident, but more than anything, I'm trying to address the healing process.  I hope if you do read it, you'll find comfort, too.

Esme's cancer is close to home for me.  We lost my mom's brother this year to this very disease. 

I really want this story to be meaningful, to address the feelings of loss and how we continue moving forward each day.  I really hope I can accomplish that. 

Thank you for reading this chapter, and for reviewing even though I'm sure it wasn't easy.

You amaze me!

 

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

Yay, I didn't realize I was the first to review or I would have said something more profound.



Author's Response:

I don't mind, really!  Just glad you took the time to review!

 

Thanks!!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

I love it! Great start of what I'm sure will be a great story!! : )



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

I hope it's a story that people will enjoy.  I've got it all outlined - and I've been dying to tell the story. It's one of those stories that just eats at me until I write!

 

Thanks again!

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