Oh! This sounds really good, I can't wait for the next chapter. Im sad that Jake had to die but I think it was very heroic to sacrifice himself for Bella and Seth. Im glad Seth is their son too, He's a hot shit--pardon my potty mouth, but hey you get used to it. I wonder how Edward will meet Bella, it has to be original, like oh oh maybe Bella can get hit with a baseball and will be taken to the hospital and Edward will be her docter. Yea, that sounds embarrassing enough.
Im so happy Seth survived, when I read the summary I was afraid the son would die but thankfully he didn't. I can't wait for the next chapter and if you want more people to read your story let me suggest fanfiction.net many writers on Twilighted have stories on ff.net and it brings more people to read it, plus you can update faster.
Good Luck with the next chapter, all my love- Andrea
I'm working on this story as fast as I can. It just seems to be flowing. But, I don't know how often I'll be able to update. Hopefully, I'll write quickly! But, it has to be told just right.
I have a soft spot for Seth. After BD, I just loved him. So, even though he's not a teenaged werewolf, I had to have him as part of this story. ;)
The first meeting between Edward and Bella will be awkward, but not quite as embarrassing as a trip to the ER... It comes in chapter 2 - which is already written, I'm editing right now. Although, with Bella, she's bound to end up in the ER at some point.
I'll probably post this on ff.net soon. I have a couple of stories there already, so it's a great idea!