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Reviews For Running Home
Reviewer: AyahPapayah (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Can't wait for the next chapter!!  I almost cried when he walked away!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Don't lose hope.  I really think you'll like the next chapter...I just need to finish it, and make sure it tells the story well enough before I put it out there.

Soon.  Really soon. :)

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

EDWARD!!!!!! I love you but grow a pair, use that Edward Cullen charm, and ask Belly out already!!

~ B

Author's Response:

I'm with you - Team Edward.

You'll have to remember (for the sake of this story) that Edward has been dumped recently, by the person he thought he would spend his life with.  He's taking it slow, afraid to be hurt again.

Fate steps in soon.  I hope you'll watch for chapter 4...

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 Practice Makes Perfect

I like Seth. He's just like 'ya my dad's dead. oh well.' haha i hate jacob just fyi & its not just this story cause that wouldn't make sense considering he;s dead.... hehehe..... i mean.... uhhhhhhh..... its so sad. ya that's what i meant...

~ B

Author's Response:

Seth is a typical kid.  He just accepts his life the way it is, and doesn't hesitate to tell the truth.

I can see that you don't like Jake...but, you are trying to find a little compassion in there for  Honestly, different Jake in this story.  He never would have kissed someone else's girlfriend!!  ;)

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

mwahahahahahahaha!........ he dead.

~ B

Author's Response:

Oh, my...  There will not be the same kind of competition for Bella in my story.  Obviously.  ;)

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Great chapter. Loved the E/B interaction. Glad Edward's planning on asking Bella out. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

There is finally a little E/B interaction - and I promise there will be more in the next chapter.  Might be a little different than you would expect, though...

I'm working on the next chapter.  I'll update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: marissaLOVE (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

First of all i love the storyline(Tee ball haha)

and Edward finally gets a nice volvo hahah

Cant wait to see the next chappie(:

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

And, yeah, tee ball!!  This is what happens when you have a child playing baseball all spring - and you carry a notebook to every game for the time during warmups...  So, I got struck by the Muse of All Things Baseball.  lol

I'm with you - I think Edward deserves a 'nice' Volvo.  The C70 is much better, IMO, than the movie Volvo.  Much more 'young single guy' than the other one.

I'm writing the next chapter right now.  I've outlined everything, so it's just a matter of taking the time to write.  Hope you'll stick around while I finish.  ;)

Reviewer: SariLane (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

loving it

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

I really hope you'll continue to read my story - there should be an update in a few days.  ;)

Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Great chapter.  I think a forum thread would be fun.

The C70 is a good looking car.  I can't figure out why the used such an ugly one in the movie.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I may just start a thread - if you'll come and play with me!!  lol

I really like the C70.  I'm with you, the car in the movie is just not Edward.  

I hope you'll continue to read my updates!!

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

aww... they are all jr high... if he asks you to hold hands would you.... circle yes or no...

lol I love how everyone is playing matchmaker... when those two already kinda sorta like eachother and don't need much encouragement.... not that they don't need it to actually follow through...

can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response:

LMAO!!  Yes, they both need a push.  Neither of them is in a place to rush into anything. 

Fate might just step in, as well...

Hope you'll watch for the next update.



Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

This chappie was great and I have been looking forward to the update...Update Soon!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'll have an update ready in a few days - then it has to go thru validation.  Keep your eyes peeled...  ;)

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 2 Practice Makes Perfect

My grandma was diagnosed with NHL at age 23. How she managed with a 6, 5, and 4 year old I'll never know. This was in the late 60's, though and she made it through. She passed away in 2007 at age 65 with a full head of brown hair, just a few grays. She always said after chemo God blessed her with less gray than what she had before!

Author's Response:

Wow!  That is amazing.  That she went thru treatment and survived to raise her children is a blessing!

My uncle passed away in January as a result of a relapse with NHL.  He survived for 5 years, then a tumor that they didn't know about caused a stroke.  The 5 years that we had him were a blessing. 

I love to hear that others came thru this disease!!  Cancer touches way too many lives.

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Awesome updates! Can't wait to see where this is going. I'm wondering who the Quiluete was that picked Bella up and if that was the reason Edward turned and left.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

I can tell you that the Quileute couple was Quil and Claire (of course, she's not a child in this story).  Edward wasn't upset at all, he just needed to coach. 

You'll see the Quileute friends more later.

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Love it!  Can't wait for an update, Bella and Edward need a little happiness. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

I believe in Happily Ever Afters!!  Sometimes, we just have to work for them - and it's worth it in the end.  ;)


I hope you'll continue to read as I post.

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

awesome car

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I thought it was a great car!  Glad you took time to look it up.  Seems like something Edward would drive.  lol

Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Yay, Uncle Edward is cute. Can't wait to see how he is with Seth. I think this chapter was a little rushed. If you took more time, slowed it down and made it more descriptive, it could be a whole lot better. I really like this, and think it can really go somewhere. Great job, just slow things down a little, don't force it.

Author's Response:

I love Uncle Edward, too.

You are probably right about this chapter.  The next one will be much more descriptive.  I hope it will satisfy!!

Reviewer: Joycp (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

I really like this story so far, can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I should be updating in a few more days!  Hope you'll stick with me!!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Can't wait to see where you take this.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm excited to take you along for the ride!! :)

Reviewer: hotNcold (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

love it<3

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you keep reading my little story...  ;)

Reviewer: NeeNee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check


loving it!!


Author's Response:

Thank you!!! 

Hope you continue to follow the story as I post more! :)

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

i really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm hoping to get the chapter up pretty quickly.  I'm excited for the next chapter...I really hope you'll like it!

Reviewer: twiwriter (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

I really like the 3 chapters that I just read. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  There is more to come - hopefully, very soon!

Reviewer: mar (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

Loved it, both of them finally moving forward and Seth well have to just love a child's innocents.

Author's Response:

They are moving forward - and it's a good thing.  I love Seth.  He's so pure.  It's a pleasure to write him!!


Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

I loved it It is very sweet how they both like each other. and i love how everyone is so friendly and knows each other and that jake was a great guy not made out to be a jerk :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I've always liked Jake's character - even when he seemed to be a little jerky...


There will be some tough moments, but most of the people they know will be supportive.  But, that will all be revealed later. ;)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

This is shaping up to be a really good story...I can already see some Uh Oh moments coming...LOL

How is it those two don't really see the immense attraction for each other *sigh* I guess it's one of the reasons we love reading about's who they are...

Author's Response:

There will be some uh oh moments along the  But, you're right, it is why we love Bella and Edward.  They are sometimes oblivious to what others see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!  :)

Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

showing love..thank you for wrighting such a good story so far..cant wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I feel the love!!  ;)


I'm really excited to get the next chapter to you.  I just need to finish it and make sure it's ready. 



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