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Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 Friendship and First Dates

That was an amazing first date and Edward seemed to really enjoy having Seth with them.  Alice thinks of everything.  I love the tingles. 



Author's Response:

I hoped you would enjoy the first date!!  Edward and Seth are so much fun to write.  If you get really bored, I have posted some pics of Rialto Beach on my thread on the forum.  I've also posted a few other fun things along the way.  ;)  I have even posted a tease for Chapter 11...

Alice is the ultimate planner/organizer!! 

I'm glad you are enjoying their blooming relationship.

 

Thanks for taking so much time to review today!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 Emergency Room

Seth is an unknowing matchmaker.  Very clever of you.

I'm really glad I found Running Home.  It's Monday, I'm at work pretty much caught up with stuff, my boss is off today and I found a great story to read.  Good times.

 



Author's Response:

Why thank you!  :D  Seth is working his 4 year old magic. 

I'm really glad you found Running Home, too!!  I'm happy to provide you with something to read on a Monday.  I only wish I could say that I'm caught up at work...sigh.

 

Thanks again and again!!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 Reality Check

I love meeting every character in your story.  Human Rosalie seems so comfortable in her role as wife and mother.  Angela, of course is the quintessential best friend.  Edward was getting a little jealous waiting for Bella's friends to show up?  I hope he learned not to wait too long after what happened in high school. :)  I hope Carlisle brought health snacks. lol



Author's Response:

Makes me happy that you are enjoying the characters as they are introduced!! 

Rose is the woman she was meant to be.  She has the love of her life and beautiful children.  This is Rose when she's happy and content!!  And Angela is a wonderful friend. 

Edward always has been a little posessive, hasn't he?  ;)  You've gotta love Carlisle as the grandfather.  You'll get to see a little more of him later.

 

Thanks again for your comments!!  I love them!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 2 Practice Makes Perfect

 “Bella, a baby with you would be a blessing, no matter when it came.”  This is the complete acceptance women who have unplanned pregnancies need but so rarely get.  Jake was an incredible person. 

Tanya must be an ass to let Edward go.  I liked his memory of Jake and him playing ball. 



Author's Response:

Jake really was an incredible man - and the perfect husband for Bella.  My Jake is based on the vision that Bella has in Eclipse - where she and Jake would be the perfect couple in a world without mythical creatures. 

Tanya isn't the nicest person...

I'm glad you noticed the ball playing mischief!!  lol  A lot of people missed it, but I thought it was fun!  ;)

 

Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

Of course I'm crying but it's a sad chapter right?  It is brautifully written and I love your characters.  Bella is broken hearted but between Charlie, Billy and now Emmett, it seems like she has some really good people to help her heal.  Edward is hurting but not wallowing - that's nice. 



Author's Response:

Sorry to have made you cry...well not too sorry!  lol  It is a sad chapter and it introduces you to the pain that they have both suffered.  They both need to heal, and that is the journey I'm writing about.

I'm so glad you are enjoying my story and my characterizations.  Thank you for the compliment!!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 

Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

aw, cute! this is a great story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I'm so glad that you are enjoying it!! 

 

Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

Ugh!  So sorry...I'm a bit behind this week on reading and reviewing.  I don't think I actually got around to reviewing last chapter although I had good intentions.  I'm typically really good abou that but you know how real life is.  Didn't want to do it two chapters in a row!

Loved the last couple of chapters. You are doing a fantastic job of developing this story and your characters.  I had to chuckle at Emmett "catching" them in a compromising position on the deck.  I was glad Emmett told Edward what Seth and Bryce are conspiring about.  It sucks that Edward had hesitations about whether he was willing to be in Seth's life that way...but you can't just go dating a single mom without considering the implications.  To quote Cuba Gooding Jr from Jerry McGuire "you can't shoplift the pooty from a single mom".  Sorry, that was crude....but also one of the funniest movie lines ever!  lol!

I'm glad Bella let Edward go to the cemetary with them....I think that was a pretty big step for Bella.  And Seth. And Edward to for that matter.  Billy better not say anything to make her feel guilty.  That just isn't right.  She deserves some happiness too.  I can't imagine how painful it would be to be in that situation.

Good grief, I'm totally babbling here....love the new chapters...keep up the great work!  Look forward to more! :o)



Author's Response:

Don't apologize!!!  I know how RL can be!  I started a new job a month ago...talk about RL kicking you in the behind!!  I'm glad you were able to catch up!!  And thanks for taking the time to review!!

I'm so glad you've enjoyed the last couple of chapters!  It had to be Emmett that walked out there and caught them... ;)  Really, he is a great brother to Edward.  He wants the best for all of them.

Edward is still having a few issues with moving on.  It will happen, eventually.  (Love the Cuba Gooding Jr. quote, btw!)

Bella is strong.  She still has to overcome a few things, too, but she really is making progress!  The cemetery was a good example of that!  Billy does have a few things to say.  You'll get to hear them soon...  He isn't trying to be mean, he just doesn't deal with the pain of loss very well. 

Babble on!!  I love it!!  More in the works!

 

Thank you again!!  Love your reviews!!!

Reviewer: Tashaaa-Cullen-ox (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

Aww. Poor bella.

:(

See, it's obvious Bella and Edward belong together. :)



Author's Response:

Pixie!!!

You know it all works out in the end...  :D 

Bella is actually getting stronger!  Edward still has a few hang-ups...

They do belong together!!

 

Miss talking to you!!

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

Thank you for this. Its great that Bella and Edward are helping each other.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!

E&B are both healing...It is great that they can help each other!!

So much to come.  ;)

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 Friendship and First Dates

Cute...Edward was perfect!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!  He is kind of the perfect guy, isn't he...even though sometimes he makes mistakes. 

 

I posted pics of Rialto Beach on my thread...check them out if you have some time.  ;D

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

Sorry it took me so long to get around to your update! This was a really wonderful chapter, although I admit I was surprised that Billy would be angry at Bella. Makes me think there may be some unresolved issues there... we haven't really had a lot of info on Billy yet. I think Sue has it right... we all want those we love to be happy and safe.



Author's Response:

Hey!!  I know how it is - trying to keep up with updates is difficult at best!!  Thanks for taking the time!

Billy isn't really angry - he's hurting.  There's more coming from him - and it wasn't easy to write.  sigh  Sue is a wise woman!! 

So glad you liked the chapter!  I really had a moment of heartfail after I'd written Esme's POV and then went on the general fic thread and started reading all the POV stuff...silly, but true.  ;) 

Thanks again!!!

 

(I'll be watching for your update. :D )

Reviewer: scout (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

I know Billy is very much torn up about Jake but that was no way to talk to Bella at the cemetery...It should have been in private away from Seth and Edward...I love that Esme got her way and we heard what she had to say...You know i love your Edward and i'm hoping that he doesn't over think things and hurt Bella and Seth...because i'm getting the feeling that he is a bit overwhelmed about being in a new relationship that also includes a child...If he continues to be honest with Bella about his feelings and the new relationship i think things will work out but we all know by now how Edward works.



Author's Response:

You'll be hearing more from Billy - not in his POV, but you will know what he's thinking...soon.  You're right, he approached it the wrong way.  sigh...Billy...

I'm so glad that you liked Esme's POV!!  I really debated including it, but I felt like she needed to speak for herself this time.

Edward is still dealing with things.  He's not good at letting things go - as we all know.  It will all eventually work out...  :D

 

Thank you for continuing to read my story!  And thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: psvtiger (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

I hope Sue gives a stern talking to with Billy. Jake didn't die a month ago, it was years and Bella is just now dating? Geez...his week with Seth better not be to try and turn Seth against Edward...that would be so...cruel.

Great story though and I loved this chapter! Let the Edward healing begin!! :)

Author's Response:

Billy has to find some way to move on.  He'll tell you more about his feelings, I promise... (I'm not going to write his POV...he just talks about it.)  He's not a bad guy, just torn.

 

Thank you!!  Healing has begun for both of them, but they are completely there yet.  I'd have nothing to write about if they were. ;)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

Great story! Great writing! Can't wait for new update! Definitly a new fav!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!  I really love to hear that!!

I try to update once a week.  Usually about Monday!!  Hope you'll continue to read along!!

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

Wow!! I didn't expect to cry like a baby but boy, did I ever. Great writing and I love this story - the angst was perfect!!



Author's Response:

I'm always floored that my story has that effect on people.  Honestly, I shed a few tears when I write it...yeah, I'm a baby!!

 

Thank you so much!!!!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 8 Cards and Confessions

My heart just broke a little! Great writing!



Author's Response:

It really shouldn't make me happy to hear that.  Right?  lol

 

Thank you so much!!  I'm happy you are connecting to my story!!!  Yay!!

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 Alone Time

oh no!! there WAS a Tanya/Edward baby and she lost it or maybe something worse???



Author's Response:

Yeah...Very tough situation.  No wonder he's been unhappy.  :(

 

Thanks again for commenting!!

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 Friendship and First Dates

AWWWW!! I was reading this thru and thought I would wait to post after getting caught up but truly that was a near perfect first date. I loved that Edward was genuinely into the kid from the get go. most guys play at that but do not ususlly really mean it. just trying to impress the mom or worse!! hehe!!



Author's Response:

*dancing happily*

I'm so glad you enjoyed the first date!!  It was so much fun to write!!

Edward really is a great guy!!  He is honest...but still conflicted (as you will see).

There are pics of Rialto Beach on my thread on the Twilighted forum.  Check it out if you feel so inclined...and come play with us!!

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 Misunderstanding

Super awesome chapter! You have us eating out the palm of your hand! I need to keep reading... I no longer have a choice!



Author's Response:

Wow!!  I didn't realize I had such control!!  lol  Honestly, I'm just amazed and happy that you are enjoying my story!!

 

Thank you!!!  Thank you!!!  :D

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 Friendship and First Dates

SO GOOD! SO GOOD! Loved this chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the first date!!  There are pictures of Rialto Beach somewhere on my thread on the forum!!  And, pics of Edward's special occasion car!  Woot!! 

Come play, if you'd like to!!

 

Thank you!!!!  *doing a little happy dance*

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

I loved Esme's POV. You did a great job of capturing the Mom in her that I think we all love. Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

I wasn't sure if I should add another POV, even briefly.  But, Esme needed to be heard.  I'm glad I added it!  She is an amazing woman - and a wonderful mother!!

 

I'm so glad you liked the chapter!!  Thanks again!

Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

your not gunna make me hate billy in this story now are you? please dont he is one of my favoret carrictor. And just because he spent the rest of his life alone does not meen bella and seth diserve the same...I get were hes commeing from but I would hate to think he would be a thron in the side of bella and edwards new found relationship..



Author's Response:

I don't think you'll hate Billy...especially after the next chapter.  He's hurting.  He just didn't behave very well...and he still won't for a while.  He'll come around.

 

Thank you for commenting!!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

aww Emmett's got blackmail material that Esme already knows about hehe

 



Author's Response:

Oh yeah.  Gotta love Emmett!!  lol

Esme didn't catch the 'make-out' session...so he thinks he's got some good material!!

 

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

This chapter was sad, but in a good way. Bella and Edward are both finally moving on with their lives.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the chapter!  They really are making progress.  Still a few issues to overcome, but eventually they will.  :D

 

Thank you!!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 8 Cards and Confessions

Edward did an awesome job of explaining what was going on and handling the situation with Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I'm so glad you liked the way it was handled.  It was hard to write!! 

 

Thanks for your review!!

 

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