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Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Dirty Little Secret

What is bella to edward beside his dirty little secret! And how do hey know one another ? please add something to the effect of this chapter one is not enough !!

Reviewer: punkie (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Dirty Little Secret

This needs to be more than a one time!!!! More chapters?



Author's Response:

I feel the same way.  I am working on expanding "Dirty Little Secret" into at least a few chapters. :)  Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Dirty Little Secret

thats amazing. im sorry thats all i can come up with, its amazing.



Author's Response:

Don't be sorry!  I'll take "amazing". :)  Thanks for reading & leaving some love.  I'm pretty proud of this o/s & am working on expanding it into a story.  Of course I have to wait until the Exploration of the Senses contest is over, so I have another week to keep playing around with it before it can go public. :)

Thanks again for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Dirty Little Secret

I'm attempting to find words for how epically awsome that was... well now I apparently found appropriate words. The use of sound as imagery and things that are normally seen or felt yeah awsome. The only complaint is that this is only a one shot. I don't suppose that I could convince you to lengthen this into a full fledged story. Cause I would read and review every single chapter.

Just be warned I am not above pouty lips and puppy dog eyes.



Author's Response:

Begging does not become you.  I perfected the pouty lips & puppy dog eyes as a child, so don't even try it! 

Okay, I might be trying to work something out with this, and I might be trying to turn it into an actual story...but don't for one second think it hand anything to do with your attempts at persuasion!

Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Dirty Little Secret

Wow. That's amazing. I really enjoyed that. Would love to read more by you :)

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Dirty Little Secret

I would truly love to see you explore and expand this. This has amazing potential! Your writing was absolutely breathless in it's desperation and need. Please consider writing more on this. It's truly damn fine writing. Wow.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Dirty Little Secret

nice one shot!  I would be good to see him come on back to bed though!

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