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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Long Walk Home

this seems like a really interesting story!!!! keep writing =]

Reviewer: pikkonoloidlee (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

Tall Caramel Macchiato *mmm*

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

Fabulous chapter!

I can't wait to see how this story will play out!

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying my little story. As soon as I get the go-ahead, I'll post the next chapter. I have the entire thing on fan fiction if you can't wait. Same story name, same handle.

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

i haven't ever been to starbuck's i don't think. very good story :)

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

 I don't drink coffee but I do drink Diet Coke...what does that say about me??? Have to say that I am intrigued by this fic and am really enjoying it! Please post more soon!



Author's Response:

Diet Coke is rather tricky because you could be drinking it for a variety of reasons. It might be calorie consciousness, or merely a preference for the taste. You are definitely a person who needs a caffeine fix, but I can't say to what level as I don't know your rate of consumption. You have classic good taste, and get a sense of security from the familiar. You're not afraid to take chances, but rarely do because of habit. You don't necesarily crave things that are loaded with sugar, or you've managed to trick yourself into believing that. You are a person who likes to be in control of many areas of your life.

 

How was that? Was it total nonsense?

-Jules

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

Drink depends on time of day and season.  Right now, in this heat?  Venti black iced tea unsweetened.  Ahhh....nectar of the Gods.

Love your story!  If anyone is going to be able to help Bella with her "issues", Edward will be the one.

What I wouldn't give to hold that hand...mmmm...or lick it.....



Author's Response:

Wow, black iced tea unsweetenced. You're hard-core on the tea. I'm impressed. This means that you don't take crap from anybody.  You're strong and opinionated and don't concern yourself with being sweet all the time.

How was that for Starbucks Pop Psychology? I'm getting better at this nonsense. I think you're the fourth one I've done so far. I don't know where I get this stuff - probably out of my posterior.

Good to hear from you as usual Lavishone;)

-Jules

Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy

Hmm, lots of interesting possibilities!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy

Well, you've got me hooked...now where are all those chapters you were talkin' about?....



Author's Response:

Twilighted is making me download a chapter at a time while they check things over to make sure I don't suck, I suppose. I have all sixteen chapters on fanficion dot net. Same title, same screen name. Come on over and say hi:)

Reviewer: SueBob (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy

So far, I'm intrigued and looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm definitely not the first person to write a sappy romance where the woman overcomes frigidity with the right man.  I think I've read that concept a few times too many. But I haven't seen a "frigid" woman paired with a man with energizer dick.  When I was toying with the idea, I thought it might make for interesting conflicts.

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy

i think this will be hilarious, as well as very interestingwith their 2 totally opposite "conditions". keep it goin!! :)



Author's Response:

Wait until you get to read chapter four. The other site I post on told me to put a "no drinking liquids while reading" warning up for that chapter. Someone choked apparently. I'm very glad that you're enjoying it. If only Twilighted would let me post a little faster...

Reviewer: ang35 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy

Keep going! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the encouragement:) I'm posting things on here, I guess, week by week, but fifteen chapters are available on fan fic dot net if you want to read ahead. Same name of story, same screen name as well.

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