Love the chapter. Glad I found you. The characters are a lot of fun and sexual adventure is well paced. :)

Here are some Latin phrases you might find useful in a given context.

Amor vincit omnia - Love conquers all. (Virgil)

Cogitationis poenam nemo patitur - Nobody should be punished for his thoughts

Cotidie damnatur qui semper timet - The man who is constantly in fear is every day condemned. (Syrus)

Difficile est tenere quae acceperis nisi exerceas - It is difficult to retain what you may have learned unless you should practice it. (Pliny the Younger)

Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus - Never Tickle a Sleeping Dragon. (motto of Harry Potter's alma mater)

I love Alice and Bella's interaction! They sound so in synch!!

Great chapter - i read it this morning and I don't remember if I left my comments or not. I might have run out of time and was rushing out the door or something. Regardless, I liked the dialogue back and forth and how frank they both feel like they can be with each other. It's a rare thing...

little lemon-scented wet naps
HAHAHAHA
Is it sad that whenever I see the word lemon, I pray it's foreshadowing? Oh, fanfic, you eat my brain...

Author's Response:

Okay! with that one, you out-perved the perv!

Even I don't think that way you loon!

Repeat after me, "A wet nap is just a wet nap! Jules would not use a sanitary wipe to foreshadow sex....ever!"

 

I loved this chapter.  And the food references were great.  And for me, so relate-able.  When I lived in San Diego I used to accompany my sister, who is a teacher, on the 7th grade field trip to Knott's.  The first stop was always the chicken restaurant for breakfast.  We still go down to SD every year and try to hit up Disney every couple of years and we love the Burrrbank Ice Cream.  The waffle cones are to die for!!  The dialogue, both internal and external was hilarious and so revealing.  Great work.

Love it. x.

Love the story!  Great chapter, as always.

I LOVE IT!!!! LOL

THESE 2 R A RIOT!! I LOVE THE SNARKY HUMOR & THE RANDOM THOUGHTS & BOTH THEIR POV'S ARE AWESOME!!

KEEP IT COMING!!

OH & I ALSO LOVE THEIR "SESSIONS" *WINK*WINK*

*SIGH* SEXY SEX SESSIONS WITH EDWARD.....PRICELESS

Yes but long chapters are fun, and this one was great, as always.
All the talk about Knott's and CA Adventure makes me miss California so badly! My hubby & I had season passes for Disneyland and went to Knotts a few times when we lived in San Diego. I'm trying to convince my hubby to let us move back there once we've both finished our degrees. :)

Loved this date and all the crazy these kids come up with. 

Eager for more.

I love the latin! Did you get the idea from a Fish Called Wanda? Hysterical! I still laugh out loud(really, I'm not just saying that) at every chapter!

Author's Response:

I've never seen that movie. Am I emulating something? I guess at some point it's inevitable...there's nothing new under the sun!

Loved it!  Their repartee is fabulous!

Wow - thanks for toning it down slightly - though it was still pretty rough to read. Yes I'm still reading your story instead of working, though this REALLY is the last chapter of the night. Again, this is incredibly sweet and seriously, Edward has the patience of a saint! Love it!!

Author's Response:

At first I thought you were writing about chapter 20 which has all kinds of sexy times in it. So I was like, "toning it down??WTF?" and then, like a dumbass, I realized you were writing about chapter 5. I have the story on two sites, and it makes me lose my mind when responding to reviews as they come in. I'm glad the chapter dealing with her assault wasn't too hard to read. I've had a few readers that actually experienced rape. When I got the A-OK from those two, I breathed a sigh of relief. I wouldn't want to misrepresent anyone out there...