Great chapter.

Ohhh Alice is definalty, freakishly prepared... =)

LMAO...Omg Bella's contract was just the BEST!! That was brilliant my dear.

I love the progression of this relationship. Their playful bantering is refreshing. The sexual tension is riveting. I look forward to seeing how their relationship blossoms and they finally realize they are in love.

Great chapter!  I'm glad that E came clean about Emmett and Carlisle right away.  These two are just too cute together!  I can't wait to see how plan MBC progresses;)

First of all, I love your story. Secondly, I grew up in Sherman Oaks but was forced to move to the ridiculous state of Tennessee a few years ago. The references to places in the valley make me happy. Strange? maybe. Anyway, Knott's Berry Farm is the best. Keep up the great work!

I would think talking to your dad about sexual problems would be seriously weird, even if he was a sex therapist.  And how, exactly, does one get on the sex therapist career path?  I can't imagine one of my third graders saying, "Mrs. Carter, when I grow up, I want to be a sex therapist."

Author's Response:

I would imagine that it wouldn't come out of the blue...but, perhaps your question is more rhetorical than one requiring an answer.

If you didn't want an answer - then disregard this. If you would like an answer then I imagine it this way:

Something like less than 10 percent of male sexual dysfunction is an actual problem with the plumbing. The other 90 percent is psychological. I envision Carlisle as your ordinary urologist or general MD. It would only take one very unique patient to send him into in-depth research for a cure. If his male patient actually had a male sexual disorder requiring surgery, I could imagine him becoming very committed to knowing more- so much so that he became an expert in the field. One success case in the JMA leads to two and so on and so forth until he is well known in the county, state, the West etc...I don't think one pursues this stuff. It's more like it pursues you.

I had one of those weird relationships with my parents where very few subjects were taboo. I always felt like I could ask my mom anything without embarrassment. Perhaps Edward shares a similar relationship with his adopted father. It would be hard to imagine if you've not experiened it.

Hee hee things that go buzzzz... ohh I would have SO asked Edward to help with that! Course u know men -- they'd be happy just to watch

I can't pick out one part I liked better than the rest; I really enjoyed the snot out of the whole chapter!

I've read a lot of fan fics (way too many to admit to) but this one is definitely an original. 

oh eddie

This was too funny with the toys and poor Edward dying with all of these visions dancing in his head with Bella etc. Fun! Nice job! Keep it going!

So cool. Now we'll get to Edward's problem. I wonder if you have a project title for this? LOL I mean, Bella had her orgasm so what will Edward get? A mind blowing experience that leaves him sated for oh... a couple hours? That would be normal. :) Great writing!

Author's Response:

Edward's journey ends up being referred to as, "Finishing The Race" on his own terms. It's coming up;) You'll see!

Wow! Didn't expect operation MBC to be achieved so quickly! I mean, I know it's not solved everything but, wow, that's a huge step accomplished! And for once she's been satisfied! When's it Edward's turn? Hint hint! ;)