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Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 7: Olives

It seems that not only is Bella repressed about her sexuality, but about other things, as well.  She won't eat olives because they remind her of her dad.  She can't let go in a physical sense because it reminds her of what James did.  She is very restrained, but it seems that being with Edward does help her to open up.

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 6: Doolittle's

It was amazing that he not only sent her flowers, but actually put thought into the meaning behind them....so cute!  It was interesting to find out more about his problem.  He was very open about a very sensitive issue...no pun intended, or maybe it was!

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 5: Research and Recovery

Her story about James was very sad.  He ruined her whole family and sense of security.  Edward's reaction to her story and how he took care of her when she was upset was so sweet.  His explainations as to why the first safe word ideas wouldn't work was pretty funny!

Reviewer: es my brand of heroin (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 11: Evening Engagements

Good for B. Poor E! He must be dying!

Reviewer: livindol (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

love it!  Can't wait to see if Edward makes it through the night!!

Reviewer: es my brand of heroin (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: Olives

I cried. She wants to be strong and act like it's no big deal even though it's become debilitating.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

yea

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

Will be very interesting to see how Bella physically responds once they get to the 'big show' because I'm getting the distinct impression she's having no problem with her big 'O' when it comes to Edward's mad hand & mouth skills :)

 

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

*giggle* Oh she is TOTALLY the one to dish payback on Emmett!! I can't wait!!!

Reviewer: sheynondoah (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

God, I love this story!

 

Every time you update, I squee and squee and squee.  And then quickly click on the link so I can read it.

 

Shey

Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

 

i totally love this story,even though reading the summary had made me hesitate a bit.edward is so sweet,i hope they have things in control soon.and i must add that the previous chapter was quite...informative.thank you for updating regularly.

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

The internal conversations these two have with themselves are hilarious!  I have to admit I did find your story over on ff and put it in my favorites so you may find me reviewing here or there.  Really, i wish I had a relationship like this when i was young!

Reviewer: pianohands (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

Gorgeous story so far! I'm totally addicted!

Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

Brilliant, heart wrenching, and a little depressing.  They are both so sad, their lives, both if their past histories are so depressing.  It's nice that they found each other, but man, so depressing. They are a good match.  Carry on with their exploration of each other, and their future. 

Looking forward to your next chapter, which, by the way is very nice of you to not to let us wait long either for it. Props!!!!

Reviewer: es my brand of heroin (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Kill All the Alarm Clocks

Glad B is so relaxed. Really want to know about E though.

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 6: Doolittle's

Got this far on the story, very good so far.  I am usually good at reviewing but I wait for a few chapters.  I am enjoying this, you handle Bellas past with compassion, just enough details w/out being condesending.  Her story is believeable.  I will continue to follow this just because I want to see how these two behave when they are finally intimate.  Seriously though, good writing!

Reviewer: Mickster (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

This chapter was really amazing! First, I was so stressed (thank you OCD angsty man), that I wanted to take a Valium. Then I was all hot and bothered because he was all Attentiveward to Bella, then I was annoyed at Spendward for doing something so rash...he could have fed 1000 people in her name with that cash instead of the pic, but I get it. Sorta. He would be buying me Chagall if he were my Edward...then I am giggling because Bella is gonna fuck with Emmett so royally well. You have hit the rainbow of emotions. I feel a bit of Fanfic Bipolor (cue the Katy Perry music), but in a really good way. Great chapter. Actually, I should mention, great story. And the subject matter could be handled very crudely, but you have found a really classy and cool way to write an amazing fic piece about people we adore. You, my young Sexward writer, are extremely talented.
Thank you for sharing your art with us.
Micki

Author's Response:

Thank you for such a well-written, thoughtful review! I love that you get what I'm trying to do here...

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 4: Kill All the Alarm Clocks

I can't believe he actually cleaned out her fridge!  What guy does that?!  If you find one....marry him!  So cute how over protective he is.

Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 5: Research and Recovery

great chapter. good blend of humor with your storytelling

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

LMAO those two talking/arguing with themselves really is fun to read. Granted they have deep moments, but when they berate themselves...well its just to funny. I love the headway they are making...OMG I can't wait to read about Emmett and him taking his own medicine...that would be awesome!!

Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

awesome!!!!

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Long Walk Home

I really like the way these two banter back and forth.  Looking forward to them doing more therapy together ;)

Reviewer: rabbit681 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

I loved her analysis of people based on their coffee order!  I also liked how sweet Edward was to her and her sassiness that she uses to cover up her insecurities.

Reviewer: cullenarymasen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

Another great chapter.  I knew that painting was going to end up being an original!  He just can't help himself.  Anyway, can't wait for your next update and some Emmett ribbing.

Reviewer: Tinkertease (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 15: Ardent Admiration

AH! And you just had to stop there?!? I'm usually not an avid Edward/Bella reader, I prefer Jake but this is fantastic! Keep going...please?

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