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Reviews For Failure To Thrive
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 22: Regrets, Regressions & Remedies

Great chapter. Prescribed sex? That's the best medication I've ever heard of. Please please please come back and finished this fic! 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 21: Seize the Love Weapon

Great chapter. Oh my God he sleep humped her! I can't say I'm surprised, but how did he not wake up?! I'm glad Bella found the loop hole in Edward's pinkie swear, so she can still have fun with his love weapon. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: Out of Nothing - Love

Yay they finally said it and it was so sweet! Edward and Bella are so adorable and perfect for each other. I'm glad Edward finally got acquainted with the Rabbit, that was hot! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 19: Of Sheep and Ducks

Great chapter. Wow Bella's got skills! I love how they share their thoughts with each other, even when they're completely insane. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: Still Waters Run Deep

Great chapter. I like how Edward and Bella got a chance to just talk and get to know each other better. I'm glad the whole gang got together too. I love the songs in this chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Confessions

Bros before Hoes, unless Hoes got no clothes! There is no way Emmett is going to get Edward on his side. Will Emmett risk the law suit and make a joke? What will Bella do? I like how Bella is so open with Edward and they're there for each other. It's so sweet. Can't wait for karaoke night! 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward told Bella about the painting. Will they tell each other they love each other soon? Can't wait for Edward to get some revenge on Emmett, it's going to be hilarious. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 15: Ardent Admiration

Great chapter. Wow, no false starts for Edward either. Hope there's much more of that later :) Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 14: Shipwrecked

Great chapter. I wanted Edward to help her out with the vibrator! Oh well, they still have a few more sex-steps to go. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Emergence

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Prudence

Great chapter. Ooh first fight! I actually liked it. Is it bad that I laughed at some of the things they were yelling at each other? I'm glad they talked and worked it out. What exercise does Edward want to do? Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 11: Evening Engagements

Wow, that was hot. Bella's definitely NOT frigid. The date was really sweet. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Morning Amusements

Great chapter. Oh my God he speaks Latin! Bella wasn't the only one getting turned on! Loving the date so far. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: Preparations

Haha love Emmett! I love the banter between the boys. Can't wait for the real date.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 8: Buttermilk Spice Muffins

I usually don't really like reading masturbatory lemons but this one was hot! Maybe it's just because I love your Edward so much and he can't help it. I liked meeting Alice officially. Haha church tongue. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: Olives

Great chapter. I can only pick up on the obvious things in Bella's dream - the cat symbolises her....'p word'. I giggled a bit a that. I love the progress Edward and Bella are making. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 6: Doolittle's

Oh Edward, he's so sweet! Maybe if he found the right girl, she might appreciate 8 orgasms..... I love pervy Edward. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 5: Research and Recovery

I love this story so much. That kiss was hot! These two are so perfect for each other. I like how Edward can get her to open up and talk. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: Kill All the Alarm Clocks

MBC has to stand for Make Bella Come! If it doesn't, well then I just have a dirty mind. Can't believe he cleaned her fridge, he's so falling! It's sweet how he's taking care of her. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Long Walk Home

This is not cliche! I love how sweet Edward is. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 2: Starbuck's

Great chapter. Love Starbucks psychology. These two are awkwardly adorable. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Cat Fancy

I just started this story but I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: carolinagirl2011 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 22: Regrets, Regressions & Remedies

Need more can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: Confessions

Phone sex, these two are getting really brave.

I loved how Bella got one over on Emmett, it's going to kill him not being able to make any jokes at Bella's expense, lol.

It's so sad what happened between Bella and her Dad, her Dad would love her regardless and she shouldn't feel guilty.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2011 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: Momentum

It seems to me that these two are already heading into normal relationship territory.  Edward is already showing great control, he's not jumping all over Bella at every opportunity with a hard on. Is there really that much work for them to do or am I missing something?

Jane x

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