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Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 20


So, I'm hooked on your story, I really like your Edward.  Gonna' update again soon?  Hope so... there's so much more to write.

Hope you had a Happy Birthday!!!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 20

Your chapters are definitely worth reviewing sweetheart and fthey are definitely worth waiting for.  I am thrilled with every new update.  I love these characters.  They are flawed and so very endearing.  I am so emotionally involved in this storyline and I am eagerto see Edward and Bella's relationship progress.  Excellent chapter and good luck on your cake!  Happy Birthday!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 20

love the sprinkles

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wedding cake? *incredulous & jealous expression* Dude, I can barely masterchef a packet mix cake! *LOL*

Ah Bella, so unsure of herself and of Edward's feelings despite Alice's interfering. Damn I want to be friends with those girls!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

WIll Edward be her tutor?  I love this story.  They are both so insecure, so lost.  Neither one realizes yet how much they need eachother!  Great update.

Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 19


Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 19

Hmmm...wonder whether Edward has decided to take things into his own hands on Bella's birthday and pay her a visit. She definitely did the pash & dash on him.

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 19

Mum's come to visit?

OMG kissing Edward as nice - it makes a nice change that she sees herself as the bad person and not Edward doing it.

Looking forward to more.


Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 19

whats he up to

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 19

hehehe loved it

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 18

How sad......probably one of your best chapters, yet.

Author's Response:

this is totally delayed but, thanks for the reviews and the cc. i'm taking it in to consideration as i'm working on my next chapter. thanks again.

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 15

There were a couple of places that were confusing -- the transitioning needed some work.  The writing was fine otherwise. 

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 14

Good one, Bella.  Nice save, Edward. 

Great writing!

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 13

You're welcome. 

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 11

Yay!  It needed to be done and it was handled pretty gently for being what it is. 

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 18

Wow, that was a sad, reflective chapter :( Glad to see that Bella allowed Edward to be her strength.

Reviewer: edc_robp (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 18

i'm glad to see bella letting her guard down, especially to let edward in.  hope she can keep her cool. 

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hmmmm......again the writing is good, but needs to be moving along faster.  All of the Bella self-talk is dragging the plot. 

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 3

The writing is good -- just need to get this party started, which I think is going to happen next!

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 2

Charlie, you disappoint me were in cahoots with Renee all along. 

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Teenage angst and parental unit overload.....

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

so sad update

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 18

poor baby

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 18

Just found your story and I love it! I was really enjoying Bad Bella at first (such a change from how she is typically portrayed), but now I'm just so sad for her! I got a little teary reading about Jake...I hope Edward is able to help Bella heal and reconnect with herself and her parents.

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 18

Sad ... :'(

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