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Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 32
Beautiful chapter! No one could ask for a more loving husband than Edward, all the ways that he made her feel loved & beautiful were blissful as was their lovemaking. As for Bella's labor, I wish mine had been so quick, for me it was 12 hours & a c-section. I'm on cloud nine for Edward & Bella at the birth of their son & whilst I know they're nervous, I know they will be wonderful parents.
Beyond well done Sweetie, thanks so much!
~Kat
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 32
I think Daniel is perfect! I can remember the feeling of being alone at home with my husband and son for the first time. I was scared to death that I would do something wrong. He survived--and so did we!
Sweet chapter; I found myself getting a little teary.
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 32
Awesome chapter. I wish my kids came that fast also.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 32
lucky bella with the quick popping out of baby
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 32
Is the beanbag a British thing? Anyway, Daniel is cool, my husband's name is Daniel. And 8lbs+ baby is big, hard to believe she didn't tear. Lucky for her. Good story.
Author's Response: I used one in the birth unit (here in Sydney) for my second - highly recommend it! My friend delivered a 12 pounder (I cringe just at the thought) and didn't tear at all. Mine was 5 pound 10 and I had 5 stitches - just not fair! :)
Reviewer: becksishere (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 32
That was lovely. I'm so glad everything went according to plan, well nearly everything. ;)
Reviewer: sml6446 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 32
Beautiful. That's what I think. You did a brilliant job with this chapter, with the birth of Daniel. I love the part about Charlie driving Bella with sirens on. That was awesome. Thank you for giving us the delivery scene. It was a pleasure to read. So what happens next?
Stephanie
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 32
Say it with me......awwwwwwwww.......I love this story. Great job!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 32
I am so glad that I had the epidural and felt nothing LOL
Thank you for giving him a normal name - unlike Renesme.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 32
Excellent chapter!
I'm so glad everything went well with the delivery and the baby is healthy! Plus, the name is beautiful!
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: KiwiEdfan (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 32
Beautiful chapter!
Made me cry. Such a sap! Lol
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 32
Love the babys name. Poor Bella was really suffering there in the end.
I have to say that pregnancy sex with Edward is H O T!
Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 32
my gues for the birth was close i guessed so fast edward would deliver the baby at home maybe that will happen with the second if the first one was so quick
congrats on an excellent chapter if only my son's birth was that simple.
Reviewer: GoldenSun (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 32
I love the name :D
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 32
yay, i am so happy the baby is here. i love daddyward! can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 32
yay, they have a son!!!!!, love the name :)
Reviewer: amyat (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 32
Yeah, lucky Bella with the quick birth. I was in labor from Tuesday to Friday with my younger daughter! She took her sweet old time getting here.
Great chapter,
Amy
Reviewer: anne2097 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 32
So sweet ... love Daddyward!
Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 32
oh that was so beautiful.
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 32
Great chapter! I am glad it was a boy. Are you going to continue the story for a while longer or is it nearly done? I will hate to see it go.
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 32
Beautiful!! And I could only wish for as quick a labor/delivery as well! 22 hours for me - ugh! LOL
Reviewer: DrNJM (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 32
So cute! Lovely to have a completely happy chapter. Makes me broody. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 32
Have I said how much I love this story? It's just so beautifully written with amazing character development. And this chapter was like icing on the cake - but the good, buttercream kind of icing :)
Reviewer: anne2097 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 31
So sad ... :(
Looking forward to happier times!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 31
hard chapter, but you did a nice job. I was wondering...did I miss something? Why did Edward move into Bella's apartment and not Bella move into Edward's house? Just wondering.
Author's Response: They sort of just drifted into it, seeing as Bella had been in hers for quite some time.
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