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Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hotness - that is some sexy action - how in the hell did they manage to stop?!  I'm sure the nurses at work won't be too happy with the new coupling!  Can't wait to see their reaction!

Loving it!

ps - how embarasment about the whole skirt thing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

LOL yeah I had quit a number of "mishaps" myself when I was pregnant. I loved the chapter and was in swoon mode when Edward was so open...*sigh*

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

fun date

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 7

LOL - That actually sounds like something I did not too long ago.  I was wearing this really nice dress, used the washroom before I left my home... went to the mall, got my new glasses... walked to the theater (other end of the mall & 3 stories up), was in line to get popcorn & a woman came up behind me and told me my dress was stuck in my undies.  Thankfully it was only tucked in and people were only seeing from about mid-thigh down, but OMG I was humiliated.

Sounds like Edward and Bella had a great date.  The after date was even more fun, but they were both right for stopping where they did.  I have a funny feeling, it's not going to take long for them to move up to that.

I really feel for Edward, as a person who loves kids, it must be hard knowing that you'll never have them.  Bella was perfect about it though.

Reviewer: melmarett (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh the stories in the Maternity ward can be hilarious, and you poor thing to walk out with that embarrassment in the hallway. I would have wished the world to sallow me up there and then LOL

Fanastic sweet story so far to which I have just discovered this delightful story of yours.

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 7

i love it.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 7

we are getting yummy

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow...hot date!!!  And yeah, sometimes stopping is soooooo hard!

Can't wait for the formal dance!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hahahahahaha, I have done that too!  When you are big pregnant clothing tends to develod a mind of it's own...

Reviewer: vbfb1 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 7

i love this story keep up the excellent work can't wait to see the journey you take these two on i think it is going to be a steamy one

Reviewer: Pandoras5thBox (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm really really enjoying this story! The mental image of Edward being ohso sweet while handling little ones makes me sigh and my heart flutter.  Great job so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love every sweet chapter!

Reviewer: mrsalreyami (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

You did such a great job describing the labor - you seem more knowledgeable than the nurse who took care of me in my first labor, who didn't recognize the signs of transition (I experienced exactly as you described here!) and told me I still had several days of labor ahead of me! Yikes! 

(PS - 45 minutes later I was holding my daughter, lol.) 

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Too funny!!  I can only imagine how you felt!!  My friend was called on in class and had to stand up to answer the teacher and when she did, her wrap skirt came undone and fell to the floor.  We dove to get her skirt and hold it up before the guys could see anything!

I really like your story and can't wait to see how this turns out.  Thanks

Reviewer: eifeltwr (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 7

Beautiful chapter!!  Please keep it up

Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

hmmm...are you british? some of your word spellings and sayings make it seem so....i'm just curious.

also, what does "lemon, lime and bitters" mean? Again, just curiuos.

now that i'm done being curiuos, i really love your story. thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

No, I'm Australian but we spell things the same way.  The extra vowels adds to my page count  :)    Lemon, lime & bitters is a  drink, usually with a twist of lime.  It's a popular ladies' drink, usually non-alcoholic.

Reviewer: Zing (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 7

Love it!  The talk was pretty heavy for the first date, but it does need to come up sometime.  I really appreciated how committed Bella and Edward were towards eachother already.  The sizzle is in overdrive for their relationship!

I feel terrible you walked around with your undies out!  It happened to me too in high school, and now I don't wear skirts!  LOL

Thanks for the update!  It totally made my night :)

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ahh, great first date. I loved the line 'Pull yourself together man'...that was hilarious. And who hasn't gotten their dress/skirt/slip stuck in their panties?? LOL...don't feel bad

 

Reviewer: mrsalreyami (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love the start. I delivered my second and third with a midwife, and I must say that the experience was so wonderful and special! I adored both midwives who delivered me, as well as the ones I generally saw at my appointments (it's a large practice). Thanks for writing something so different from what we usually see!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

That was a really funny life experience you put inthe chapter I lmao! I am glad that Bella is very understanding to him you know that took alot of courage to tell her all that especially about the cancer but for their sake I hope his body has healed itself like his doctor said!

Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 7

More than enjoyed. They have such an easy romance. I can't wait until Alice starts demanding details about this date from both of them!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 7

that must have been embarrasing.....

 

But i feel so bad for edward... but i'm glad that he is ok now. keep writing =]

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

That happened to me on my way home from school when I was 15...I had a skirt on and some guy followed me home in his car, ogling me....I was scared and was calling him all kinds of names in my head...finally I got home and noticed that my bookbag was holding my skirt up on one end....OMG......

great chapter, glad to see Edward and Bella are starting a relationship...looking forward to the next chapter

~~Cyndi

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying this story! I like Bella and Edward's interactions with one another. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: GracieHartford (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

awesome. i love that your story is so real. Usually the stories I read don't have the characters asking out on dates like real people do. Or waiting until the second or third date. Keep going. Well Done.

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