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Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

it was tart but not the full pucker

Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 8

Just dropping you a note of encouragement. I'm really liking this story. It's soft and sweet despite some the hard issues you've included in it. Makes me feel warm and fuzzy about my own little Sprogglies.

Hope to see an update soon.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 7

I like how you added your own experience.

That was a great scene! Edward is hot@

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another great chapter

Great kiss

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love your Edward

I don't think i have ever read one where Alice is prego

I have always hated Tanya!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

Gotta love Alice

Really love the story

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

Reminds me why I had an epidural both times LOL

Another great chapter

Reviewer: Pandoras5thBox (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 8

Poor Chelsea and Chelsea's mom!
But, gah! I enjoy this story!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

first chapter down - love it

 

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 8

Bella didn’t know how much longer she could wait before begging him to make love to her. 

 

Not long.  Not long at all.

[[PLEASE]]

Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

awesome.

Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 8

Mmmm.

 

Poor, poor Chelsea. That's horrible, so young. But a great addition to this story.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great story.  Love the interaction between the major players. Edward being an OB/GYN would be great.  When in labor just concentrate on that gorgeous face and body.  It would be better than hee hee ho ho.  Very sad about Edward's cancer at such an young age.  But at least his dad had the forethought to suggest freezing some swimmers before the radiation.  He so loves babies, it would be a tragedy if he couldn't have one of his own.  wonder if Bella will be the lucky mom?  To get him all to herself and carry his child, awesome.

 I love babies myself.  I have three. I agree I don't know how I would react if one of my girls came home.  It would be unsettling at minimum.  But like you I hope with love and understanding. I hope they take the young man to task in some form.  Traumatic  experience for someone so young.  Either way they decide about the baby will haunt Chelsea all her life.

 

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

great chapter! i am interested to see what happens with chelsea's baby. its a sad situation.

also, E & B's relationship seems to be progressing nicely! very steamy indeed!

Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter. I hope you plan to follow up on Poor Chelsea. I need to know what happens with her baby.

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 8

How bitter sweet (with Chelsea and her baby  -- really wondering what's going to happen there) and adorably and *Squee* with Bella and Edward!!

I'm addicted, and I'm not ashamed to admit it. Lol.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 8

wow wild chapter

Reviewer: simon (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thank you for writing this story.  I cannot image the many different venues this  can take.  From dealing with infertility to getting pregnant when no one thought it was possible to Tanya showing up and causing trouble.  She is such a minx.

 

Keep writing and thank you

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

Thanks for updating!

 

Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 8

I have just found this story... I love it!!!! Cant wait to see where you are taking this :)))

This sight of Edward with a baby in his arms is making my swoon for him even more!!!

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter. I have two daughters my self. I don't know I would act. Hopefully with love and support.

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 8

I soooo love this story.  I have reread it at least 4 times!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

My kids are all grown up but I don't honestly know how I would have handled a situation like Chelsea's and her mother are going through!  Good story line though because it is unfortunately its a part of real life and it happens everyday!

Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 8

I don't have a daughter, so I am not quite sure.  I have been discussing sex(not the actual nitty-gritty) with my son since he was about six.  I am hoping that as he matures he will be safe in his "practices".  I was the one to talk to both of my younger brothers and both of them were able to do so.

Parenthood for an adult can be a scary thing.  I can't imagine a child having to deal with that.

I don't think either Bella or Edward is going to be able to stop themselves much longer.  Their chemistry is just too great...

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 8

What a difficult situation!  Can wait for your next chpter here and on FF.net

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