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Reviewer: kodak16 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
cute chapter wish i could spend a weekend with edward... cant wiat for the next update!!!!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
Yeah...like Charlie can't figure out they're sleeping together. Clueless guys don't make Chief of Police.
But wait till Renee finds out about Edward...<snort!>
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
Every girl should have her very own Edward as you write him!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 12
That was quite the weekend with Edward... I want one of those. LOL
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 12
What a weekend!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
love it
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow these two could start a forest fire!
Great chapter, I love that these two are so in love!
No condoms though, I just wonder if maybe Edward is a little to sure of himself that he is still sterile?
I would love to see these two have a baby though! Alice and Bella pregnant at the same time would be a blast!
Reviewer: purpleblanket (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 12
I hope Bella gets knocked up!
if not, where and when is the drama stuff happening? Shits gotta hit the fan sooon!!
Otherwise, cool story. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 12
Sigh...Steamy, McDreamy Dr. Edward *swoon*
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 12
How sweet!
Glad Edward and Charlie got along fine...
Can't wait to read more and more and more!!!!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 12
what a lovely chapter! i love the love! its a really great story that i enjoy so much! i can't wait to see where it take both of them!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
great chapter! update ssoon!
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
i love a happy bella and edward
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 12
Excellent chapter. I'm so happy that they are happy and in love with each other. For the first day after the first time, it all went very well - no nervousness, no regrets - they're just happy and in love with each other - and they even told Charlie right away. They are just so cute together. And I'm glad that Edward and Bella had the medical talk as well. I know Edward said that he's still considered infertile, but he hasn't been checked in 4 years. Maybe there's a chance for that. I realize it's still early in their relationship and all, but if there was a chance Edward could have a child, I'm sure he would just love that.
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
Excellent! Passionate and emotional at the same time! Perfectly beutiful! Please write more soon!
Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
This chapter was amazing, Congratulations!!! I really enjoyed reading it, every thing was so lovely. Their first time together was even better than what I imagined. I’m totally sure you wrote it just in the write way, it had the right amount of everything love, passion, tenderness… it was ‘simply wonderful’!!!
Can’t wait until next chapter to see where all this is heading for. Keep writing you’re doing a great job, this is a fantastic story!!!
Kisses. R.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 11
Holy Hale and then some...I think if I smoked I'd be lighting up right now...wow is it hot in here? Excellent work my dear. Their first time together was definalty worth the wait.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 11
That was lovely.
They both had a great night at the ball, and then they finally got to be together. It was beautiful. :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 11
That was just perfect - very romantic and sweet. Sigh!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
Whew Girl!! *fans self* Damn steamy!! O___o
Wouldn't have minded hearing other peoples thoughts/comments on our couple at the Ball!! That stupid cow Jessica humph! LOL That was funny.
Reviewer: Spinningmadly88 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
I was so happy when I got the alert this story was updated and you did a great job on this chapter! Worth the wait, thanks for another great chapter.
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
Perfect!!!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
Well I have goose bumps!
Great chapter, great lemon, great relationship!
As always Jessica being catty! She deserves it because we all know she was no friend to Bella!
I loved the love scene and how tender and romantic it was as well as being HOT!
Good Job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
Really good. Was her dress a certain designer?
Author's Response: No, just something I thought up in my head - I've probably seen something like it somewhere.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter!
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