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Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 12
They are busy little beavers...she must have a hoohaa of steel! :)
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 13
another great chapter!!
Reviewer: melmarett (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 13
I know you love your reviews!
You certaintly set the ball on fire with those two and agree that sometimes first time can be sweet.
Can only imagine what troubles lie ahead with Edward meeting Jacob, and know doubt will stir Edward up just for fun and the embarrassment of Bella LOL
Keep it up
Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story! Please keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 13
So Sweet!!! Loved it! How are they going to stand being away??? It will be very hard!!! Update soon!!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
I am enjoying your story. I can not wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh, they are so cute and in love!!!! I'm looking forward to seeing what they they got each other for Christmas!!!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 13
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
I really liked this chapter, but I'm not sure I agree with how you resolved the Chelsea situation. I probably would have gone another way. I would have had them keep the baby, but not have the mother raise it as her own, but I can see how it might be a solution because she is so young.
Also, I've been thinking about Edward's fertility situation. Low chance isn't exactly No chance is it? Is that where you're taking this? I have to say, that would be pretty awesome.
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
i love these two.. they are so lovey dovey and squishy!!! oh i love them!!!
i still think Bella is going to get pregnant !! i have a feeling !!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter! I love this story - it's so sweet and sexy, too!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 13
aw, i loved this chapter for a number of reasons!
i loved the lovin'-thats always good! E&B are so great together as a couple and i love hearing about they're lived together! i can't wait to see what the future brings!
also, i liked that you included chelsea's mother in this chapter! it was a lovely addition!
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 13
I'm so happy, but I need new panties
Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love it and cant wait to see where this is going!! :-)))))
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
Cuuuute! This was delightfully light, fluffy and with a lovely amount of citrus!
I like the workmates reaction to the new couple. I'm sure there are plenty of 'green' faces walking the hospital halls!
Will Edward follow Bella to Florida? Oh I hope so! What a wonderful Christmas surprise!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 13
update soon!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
Delightful chapter. Full of love and devotion. Bella and Edward together almost every night. The wonderful news about Chelsea and Mrs Johnson and little Marcus. It's great to know Mrs. Johnson came around to the idea of being a grandmother. Also Chelsea learning to accept the child as well as her dad. It's bringing their family closer together. As Edward and Bella relationship is deepening and growing, the acceptance in Edward's family as well as Bella's dad and Jake. Jake still teasing her about everything. Nice Pre-Christmas celebration with Charlie and Jake, then with the Cullens over at Alice and Jasper's house. It's going to be hard for Bella to be away from Edward for a few days, but just think of the welcome home party between them. Looking forward to future chapters for more love and romance to come.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 13
Ohhh I am so thrilled that Mrs. Johnson will be keeping the baby and it will work out. Sigh...so worried about that so thank you for keeping us in the loop.
LOL...Edward definatly will be spending as much time as he can with Bella. Racing home will be an understatement for those two. *Snicker* not sure if they'll get to presents first...
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 13
love this story,refreshing to read a beautifull love story
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awe!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
Love it.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
This story is so sweet and sexy at the same time.
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
LOVE IT, they are so passionate cannot wait for the next update.
Reviewer: eifeltwr (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 13
GREAT CHAPTER!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awesome! please write more soon. They are just sooo sweet together. It will be tough for the next couple of days that they are separated.
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