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Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 8
I just found this story and so far this is my first review...reason one...I really need to go to sleep because i have to work in about six hours and reason two..because i really wanted to say something.
First let me say i love this story. Even though i have to think through some things like Lemon Lime and Bitters and translate them to American (because lets face it it's not english)...i really think it's fabulous.
This last chapter really hit home for me, and that's for one main reason. I'm not a midwife or a nurse but my aunt is. She works at the childrens hospital and specifically in the teen clinic. They deal with a little bit of everything there and when you had the thirteen year old having the baby it made me think of my aunt, because the youngest they've had to deliver wasn't 13 but 11. Reading that just really made me want to say that....
anyway...i loved how this chapter and all the previous ones ended. You don't end on a down note, even if there are some serious things brought up in the chapters you always end on a light note. I think that's fabulous.
I really hope this made sense. It probably didn't and if it didn't blame it on the ramblings of my sleepy mind. :)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 33
I just feel the need to point out, sex while you're breastfeeding just isn't that glamourous...It's not fun spraying milk all over your partner in the heat of the moment!!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Outtake 1: Alice & Jasper
Excellent outtake!
I loved learning about that first meeting and the time they spent together that was hinted about in the main story!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Outtake 1: Alice & Jasper
Awwwww....that was sweet, hot and just oh so perfect at the end :) There's just something so natural and matched about our beloved Alice & Jasper pairing.
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Outtake 1: Alice & Jasper
slightly confused did you not write that alice and jasper already knew each other and that alice moved away to hawi and wouldnt come home or something
Author's Response: You may be thinking about Jacob's sister. Chapter 4 has a brief telling of J & A's first meeting, which I've expanded. Hope that helps.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Outtake 1: Alice & Jasper
Awwww, that was SO sweet! I'll be honest and admit I wasn't expecting as much from the outtakes as the rest of the story, and I was very pleased to be wrong! Awesome!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Outtake 1: Alice & Jasper
enjoyed it throughly
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Outtake 1: Alice & Jasper
=O...
This was...
...
ok, well the hottest thing I've ever read.
Like Bella/Edward had some hot lemons but this was fuck hot. It was white hot. BLUE HOT. I'm speechless.
...and desperately in need of a cold shower. Or my boyfriend. Whichever.
Damn.
I wish there were things I could say besides reiterate how speechless and fucking sexy that was.
...but I can't. I'm gaping like a fish and probably going to read it 4 more times.
=D amazing.
if that didn't cure your depression, nothing will =P
Author's Response: LOL! My work here is done :)
Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Epilogue
IM GONNA MISS THIS STORY IM PLANNING OF TURNING IT INTO A EBOOK LOL THANKS FOR THE STORY CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Epilogue
My eyes got moist at them last few lines. It was just so sweet!
I honestly loved every chapter of this story and have been following it for a while. Your a brilliant writer and I hope you post another story soon. I'll keep an eye out, just incase you do ;)
Oh, and sorry the review is so late :L I only just read the chapter xD
Rating? 10/10
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Epilogue
I will miss my 'babies' fix - thank you for writing an amazing story. It has given me hours of wonderful entertainment and set my imagination on overdrive!
I really look forward to your new story. I think I will give it a little bit as I love sitting and devouring chapters at a time!!! Well, thats the plan - I probably won't be able to wait. Oops.
kisses to you xxx
Reviewer: wannabbella (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Epilogue
Wow, what a beautifully written story. I loved and enjoyed every minute of it. It was so different and it tugged at my heart. I loved all of the medical aspects of this story and how loving and beautiful your characters were. I enjoyed every word of this story and cannot wait to see what you write next.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Epilogue
I loved it!! It was so cute!!!!!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Epilogue
Edward looks especially delicious in Eclipse doesn't he?? :) I loved Eclipse!! Jacob/Taylor is good looking, but he's nothing compared to Edward!! Lol!!
I love how everything turned out! The kids turned out like their parents aww so cute!! This whole story was so cute and perfect!!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 32
So cute!! I love the baby's name! :) So adorable!!
I have always wondering why Bella didn't move into Edward's house instead of them living in her apartment! I would've thought they would have more room at Edward's place!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 31
That was so sad!! It was an important event to cover though because it showed the pain and fears that people may feel!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 29
I love how you put your experiences into the story lol! At least we know they are possible :)! That is a beautiful name that they chose! Great chapter!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 26
Omg I can't stand the thought of something bad happening to the baby! That is their miracle baby and I don't think they could survive if she lost it! I'm so glad you posted that chapter note at the end!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 25
I love these chapters more and more lol!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 24
Aww so cute!! I loved it!! :) I'm so glad he didn't think Bella cheated! I think that would've have destroyed the trust they have and it would've ruined their relationship!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 23
YAY!! THAT'S SO PERFECT!! ALL A BABY!!! HAHA I LOVE IT! THAT'S WHY I'M POSTING IN CAPS HAHA!!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 22
Omg I had a feeling Bella was gonna be pregnant! I know u haven't said for sure if she is or not, but I know it lol!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 21
Wow! :)
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 18
Aww I love Edward! Bella is so lucky! Lol :)!
Reviewer: 21Twilight21 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 17
:) :) :) :)
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