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Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 20
Wow, now that was a chapter!
I was crying by the end of it because of Victoria and the goodness of people!
Good job and boy is it nice to have you back after the holidays, I hope you had a good one.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 20
nice
Reviewer: Nannabell321 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 20
Great to see an update from you! I love this story so much. I am so glad that Victoria got away, but I have a feeling that James will make his presence known soon. Take care and I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 20
I hope B gets prego
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 20
This Edward is just too good to be true. *sigh*
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 20
Great chapter...so glad Victoria's safe! Hope they find a way to make James fry!!! And I thought you handled Billy's funeral beautifully.
Now...can't wait to have more fun with Charlie dating! (Safe sex....bwahahaha...would LOVE to see Bella bring up the subject to get back at him for the sex talks when she was a teen!)
And now we get to see the prep for E&B's weddiing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 20
I'm so relieved that Victoria is getting away from James. Your story is so well-written, it's a joy to read--even the sad parts.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 20
welcome back it was great
especially teasing Charlie
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 20
James is what you call a good for noyhing dog beating up on an eight months pregnant woman I would of liked to see obe of the cullen boys tear him up he ,
Reviewer: lmouille (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
I really hate men who hit women and especially men who hit pregnant women. I hate James and actually feel sorry for Victoria, because in other stories she is always bad. I hope everything works out for Bell/Edward. That noone tries to break them up and they can somehow have kids.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
Thank God Victoria called Bella. I wonder if Bella is pregnant wouldn't that be a blessing to her and Edward since he thinks he can't father kids.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Men who hit women are sick, but one's who hit pregnant women are literally the scum of the earth. I hope he gets his. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 20
The bastard should be shot!!! I can't believe I'm actually liking Victoria in a story....LOL It's deff different but I like it!!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 20
lots happenning ,hope victoria does n't back out of pressing charges
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 20
What a great chapter, I was so happy when I saw the e-mail saying there was an update. I just love this story!
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 20
ok no james coming for revenge and hurting bella!
Reviewer: akka452 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 20
loved the chapter it left me wanting more. i so cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 20
Great chapter!
I'm glad that Victoria got help. =)
I wonder what will happen when Bella and Edward are in Jacksonville.
Looking forward to your next chapter! Please update soon?
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 20
this chapter broke my heart! so so sad! Please make things better and give us some happy times :)
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 19
I cried.....Poor Jake..I hope he meets his dream girl soon!
Love the engagment! It was so cute!
And go Bella!! Telling Jess off like that!
Reviewer: heathercmg (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 19
This is such a good story.
I am so looking forward to the wedding and maybe even a baby (if they're lucky)....
that would be so perfect!
Great chapter look forward to reading more soon.
Reviewer: ahlesstennes (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 15
Any one of them would be just fine, but Edward? YES!!!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 19
this chapter had many emotions running through it and was exilarating as well as sad in the end with billy's death well written
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 18
I loved the proposal. The setting was perfect since that was where they fell in love. I'm really enjoying this story. Thank you.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow...silent tears fall...I'll miss Billy too.
I do hope you have Happy Holidays...
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