Reviewer: forever_resolutions (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
I like it! Very original! You're a very good writer!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Reviewer: JWash (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Can you post the next chapter soon? PLLEEAASSEEE! I love this story and it is torture waiting for the next part.
Reviewer: locksofglory (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
ok now, don't be too much a perfectionist and tease us with an appetizer at least!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, you know me too well! :) LOL.
I'll post a part of the chapter on the thread before Friday. How's that? :)
Reviewer: SunnyKitten (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
Wow, this is dark but I like it a lot so far. I thought at first that Bella planned on killing herself, but now I'm not so sure. I am hoping she is simply planning on leaving to find the Cullens? I'll keep reading to find out.
Reviewer: SunnyKitten (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
I just started reading and will definitely continue. I'm intrigued and impressed so far.
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
oh man, i cant wait to find out what her plan is!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
just starting to read this story. the idea intrigued me. its original among most of these repeat storiesso far, haha
Author's Response: Hello and welcome. Thanks for the kind compliment of my story being original. :) Glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
This is really good! Bella's a little scary tho.
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Sounds like it's going to be a good story. It's original. Keep the good writing!
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
Great follow up to the first chapter. This ran cohesive with her plan and was not "rushed" but you also did not drag it out...and for that I am thankful! I'll admit, I was a little nervous when she laughed with Jake and worried she might put off her plan. Thanks for not letting that happen.
Author's Response: Hi. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Wow. Amazing idea and first chapter. I love the thought of the adults putting Bella in an instution. I mean, she was pretty far gone when Edward left. It makes sense and makes for a really different fic. I'm excited to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Welcome! Thanks for reading my story. I'm thrilled that you like my logic so far. Hope you'll stick with me.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Please tell me that Bella's POV is coming soon? I've been trying to stay on with this, but you lost me with Edward. I've had a really rough time sticking through his part of the story. I keep staying on because I want to know what happened to Bella when she went to Alaska.
Author's Response: Yes, Bella's POV is coming up very soon. But, she never went to Alaska...?
Thanks for sticking with my story.
Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Just finished chapter one of your story, and I have to say it is quite intruiging. You might just have me hooked... :)
At this point I'm very greatful for the other 9 chapters you've already put up.
Keep up the writing.I like scheming Bella. ^_^
Author's Response: Welcome! Thanks for reading and sharing your feedback with me. I hope you're still with me after you read the next chapters. :)
Reviewer: JWash (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
I'm dying for the next chapter! Please update SOON!
Author's Response: Chapter ten is in the queue! :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
Love how the story is progressing! Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Gosh, you are so nice to review as you're reading. It's really rewarding to hear your reactions. Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Thought it was a great first chapter! I like where you started in your story too!
Author's Response: Welcome! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: SuperS (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
Wow this is a really good story so far, truly laughed over Bella's angry thoughts against Dr Jane!
Author's Response: First of all, welcome! Thanks for reading my story. :)
I am thrilled that you liked Bella's hatred of Dr. Jane.
Reviewer: JWash (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
I FINALLY got my forum log in. Your story now has a thread!!! I hope my fellow fans will support your story there too.
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewforum.php?f=19
Author's Response: Guess you weren't kidding... Thank you.
Your support is really too kind. I am a forum virgin, but I am happy to figure it out and answer your questions on there. :)
Reviewer: Kandykanegirl34566 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
its good
Author's Response: Welcome! And, thanks very much!
Reviewer: Pkullen (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
I could totally see how things in the story could have gone in this direction and it is interesting. Looking forward to reading more ...
Author's Response: Welcome! Thanks very much for reading and letting me know what you think. Really appreciate it!
Reviewer: clumzyedward93 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
wow this is awsome i wish i could write like this and the best part s newmoon could ahve somewhat gone like this if the saga was a little darker
Author's Response: Welcome! Thanks for reading and for your very kind feedback. I hope you'll stick with my story - I've got a lot more coming... :)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 2: Tiffany Pens and Other Torture
Through my tears I am wondering how you will help Bella get through this and to find Edward again.
Author's Response: Oh, tears?! You are too sweet!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
Well, I'm all in!!! The darkness doesn't scare me...heck I've lived there for a while and can feel for Bella. Pretty great story for your first fanfic!!!
Author's Response: Welcome! And, thank you SO very much for leaving me feedback on each chapter posted. It's so gratifying to hear your reactions as you read. It's sort of like cooking friends dinner and the difference between hearing it's good after each course or at the very end. Both are wonderful to hear, but that former - after each course - makes you feel like a better cook. :)
I've spent some time in the darkness too. I think it makes you appreciate the light all the more.
Reviewer: Lilhayley21 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
this story really got my attention! i thought it was brilliant how you put bella in a mental hospital after edward left, it just seemed to fit so well. i'm really looking forward to reading more of this story so keep them coming.
and you did wonderfuly for your first fanfic :)
Author's Response: Welcome! Thank you for taking a chance of my story and sharing your thoughts with me. I hope you'll stick with me. :)
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Beautiful Lies
dark ,very dark !
Author's Response: Welcome! Thank you very much.
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