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Reviewer: Gumdrop147 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
Wow,
this is brilliant, I've been looking for a story like this for a long time!
Just typical family smut!
Love it.
Please update soon!
Reviewer: mariehasnotoes (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Island In The Sun
Hey there, i really like your fic (:
i'm portuguese so i thought i should hep you with the translationthat you have in here, that is'nt quite right.
“Eu sou tão pesaroso!” should be "Peço imensa desculpa!"
“Não deve comer o vinho. É mau para o bebê.” should be "não deve beber vinho, é mau para o bébé"
"Está grávida, não é ela?" should be "Ela está grávida, não está?"
i hope you don't feel offend by this, i just thought that you'd like to have the right wors in there, so that people that speka portuguese won't find that weird, and you get the perfect translation to go with this very nice fic :D *
Reviewer: Dropdeadfredward (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
loved it. no idea what bella should do about winning the bet, as im not the writer. ive written twilight fanfiction, but have never had the guts to post anything except for a few crackfics on quizilla under the same penname.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
walk the plank
Reviewer: bb1 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Good Ship Venus
Yes! You're back! I was concerned that you disappeared in some kind of mysterious boating accident. You know I love this story. I don't think I need to tell you again.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Good Ship Venus
Thank you so much,,,,, my kids thank I've lost my mind I was laughting so hard this moring they all most missed the bus.. I so love this story I'm so glad I found it...
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Love Game
Em story was over the moon, loved it.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Good Ship Venus
Poor Bella! I can just imagine her embarrassment at the doctor telling her she had something encrusted on her cornea. And then to run into Charlie! And now I want to know how it happened the first time! (it would make an interesting flashback or outtake...)
The baby presents were sweet and cute!
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Sexy Results
Great chapter
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
Edward's gifts to Bella and the baby were so sweet! Loved the chapter. I think that Bella and Edward should have sexy times in the kitchen before making dinner or something. I love reading kitchen lemons(Is that weird?).
Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
Oh my..I'm not sure I can offer any ideas of substance for the Bella winning the bet. I'll be anxious to see what some of the suggestions are.
I love this story...glad to see the update. I LOVE that episode of Seinfeld and have watched it sooo many times. Had to laugh at their "contest" and at the way they were both torturing each other.
OMG...the eye thing was hilarious! Ouch!! Your sense of humor just kills me! :o)
Reviewer: likeme (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
This is hilarious! and so sweet! I love it!
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Hysterical
You have done a great job...thanks for the laughts..
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Island In The Sun
Cool chappie
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:49 PM · On: I Feel Pretty
Ohhh my the part with the Esme was beyond fun. Thank you for the laught I so needed it. Great chapter. Kym
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
To be honest I could've not read about the eye debris... not really funny and gross. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Astro Girls
Naughty edward.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Jerk It
I loved it... Laught so hard it hurt,,, ;). Kym
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
love it.
Reviewer: LoganOwens (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
My vote is for dr. Cullen and patient bella ! Sexsi.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
what a cute chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
I hope this!! What an awful ER visit.
Reviewer: avaesyn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
Hahaha Jizz in her eyes, nice Edward, very nice!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
love it
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Good Ship Venus
Great chapter!
I had a feeling that Edward would be the first to crack during their bet. :) Although, I thought that Bella was going to crack first.
Hmm...I don't know what Bella will make Edward do. Maybe she might make him be her waiter. ;) Perhaps make him make her dinner and give her the 'full' catering treatment. ;) That includes two things important to a pregnant Bella....Food and Edward. :D
Looking forward to your next chapter!!
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