Reviewer: annayleene (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Ascension

i really really like it = ]

Reviewer: annayleene (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Ascension

i really really like it = ]

Reviewer: annayleene (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Ascension

i really really like it = ]

Reviewer: cakes4547 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Ascension

Great story! Is that all you are going to write, or is there more? id love to see where they go from there! I have always thought about what Alice and Jasper's first years together were like.  I really enjoy it so far, please keep writing!

Reviewer: laurienorth (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Ascension

cute

 

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Ascension

Sweet!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:12 PM · On: The Wrong Rain

I like your story. I can't wait till Jasper walks in. But wouldn't the woman that worked there be back or was it she who called the police? I would've died laughing if Alice cleaned the place up and actually started serving people. Anywho, good job! So this is right after Alice is turned? One of these days someone is going to do a story of what happened with Alice, the old Vampire that was working in the asylum and James' visit and threat.

Good Job!

 

 

Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Ascension

I am a HUGE Alice and Jasper fan so this was such a treat for me to read!! I loved every single part of it!!

~Twivamp :)

Reviewer: kcrowther1115 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Ascension

I love it! I never really cared for Alice and Jasper but you've made me a fan! Can't wait for more updates!

Reviewer: ekmemerald (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Ascension

:D

I loved the way it built up to him walking in ;) My heart was pounding, and it was VERY suspenseful waiting for his reaction. And Gabe and Regina are cute, teehee ;)

~Elise

Reviewer: kaydub (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Ascension

i like alice and jasper stories. can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: luxa (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:26 PM · On: The Wrong Rain

wow that's not what i expected alice to do while she was waiting for jasper to show up! i like how it was a longer period of time and how alice established herself there. i can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the story!

Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:06 PM · On: The Wrong Rain

This is a very interesting story.  I look forward to reading future chapters.

Reviewer: ekmemerald (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:38 PM · On: The Wrong Rain

I love this, it's amazing so far :)

I tried to review earlier, but something went wrong :S

But now I REALLY have to find out what happens ;)

~Elise

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