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Reviewer: pammi (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

brilliant! please keep it coming!!

Reviewer: cgeo (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:08 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo

Good job, Farkle!  Nicely done.

Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

I like it so far, please update soon!

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Not as funny as the first chapter but still really good. I look forward to the future chapters.

Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:52 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo

That... was... absolutely... HILARIOUS. *Insert gasps of uncontrolable laughter where apprpriate. 'I've moved on to donkeys' fucking priceless. So funny it was Legen...wait for it...dary.

Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

this is great - obviously you know what you're talking about, and it's fascinating to see Bella's responses filtered through her technical descriptions. and this weird slightly grumpy (and naked) edward is intriguing. excellent story!

Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Interesting premise -- looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Great chapter!  I am really getting into it!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:13 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo

This is different and seems like it will be a good story. I will still be wondering on the Em and Bella, eww, he is like a brother for her.


Reviewer: sixeightshuffle (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

So I don't know what possessed me to start this story, but before I'd even finished the first chapter I was dying of lulz and completely in love with this story.  You are ridiculously funny, and I demand friendship, like...yesterday.  Haha.  Can't wait for the next chapter. <3

Author's Response:

I'm not funny, I just read the lines as they're given to me.

Reviewer: ludeste (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:04 AM · On: 1 Michelangelo

I like the way you've started this! Guess I'll just continue on reading...


Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Love it already though I am dying to see into Edwards head. More please soon.

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

lovely - i felt like a fly on the wall in the studio, watchign them paint, trying to stay out of their way, guilty for eavesdropping and looking over their shoulders at their work...  my inner voyeur is anxious for more.

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

what was the form for?

Author's Response:

so Edward can get paid.  THe school pays the model, not the teacher.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

I'll bet the quality of her painting is largly due in part to the quality of the model...

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 04:27 AM · On: 1 Michelangelo

Staring at the pretty....then having to paint it?

No wonder Bella is having a tough time...

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 03:23 AM · On: 1 Michelangelo

Lovely.  Will you continue?  I'll keep reading!

Reviewer: StingrayCullen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

This story is great so far :D
I love your descriptions and writing. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Interesting start!  Looking forward to the two of them actually talking and connecting.

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Good to see an update so fast.  Oh I wish I could read Edward's mind.  ;)

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Loved Edward putting Lauren in her place, that was total win. I'm dying to know what Edward thinks of Bella's artwork...

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

Oh, Bella... how could you let that fine specimen get away? I would be interested in reading more of this.

Reviewer: mysticmemories (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 Gentileschi

i know that this is not meant to be a cliffe..but it feels like one.
love the story, love mr. model cullen...keep writing and keep updating!

Reviewer: Moon108 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:44 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo

WOW, I really like where this is going. Just so you know this gave me flashbacks from my own time in art school. Hours apon hours of drawing nudes, and you are so right not one of them good looking, a few were even down right scary. But the way I look at it, if you have the balls to stand in front a class full of students in nothing but a smile, then more power to you. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: spiky_black_do (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:11 PM · On: 1 Michelangelo

i've been waiting for a story like this.

thanks for posting it!!!

i can forsee a very...ehem...INTERESTING future here XD

update soon please XD


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