Hmm, that Edward is a puzzling one.  I'm interested to find out why he had to take off to Santa Barbara so quickly...and what the guys were arguing about.

xoxo Sarah

I just want to say to Bella..."Duh..."

It took her this long to make a guess at what was wrong...this or he's going to prison or the peace corps or something...

Love this story...looked forward to the update...looking forward to the next one...

ahh!! update!

WTF was with jessica? did she do something to bella? or to something of bella's?  it sounded like it by the way she said "I'm so sorry!  I shouldn't have done it but I was so mad!"

i really desperately want to know what she did!

 

loved the RHPS scenes, ive only ever seen the movie on dvd (but it WAS AWESOME), but i live in australia, and in my city im lucky if i get one muscial per year. Ive only ever seen one in my life :(

I will aspire to go to america in the future and SEE RHPS! (and others yay :D)

 

update soon!

Author's Response:

I'm sure RHPS plays somewhere in Oz, I just don't know where...

God the 'Rocky Horror Picture Show' is my guilty pleasure.... too bad edward was a virgin to the movie because it would have been funny to see him break out in song and start singing 'Hot Patootie' to bella while getting  on his bike.. but that wouldn't fit with the story haha.. anyway this is a great story i am curious on why jasper warned bella not to fall for edward.. is him not staying in the area the real reason.. i have a feeling that its not.. also you mentioned that bella has scars... what were they from... but i guess all in due time we will find these out.. great job and can't wait for the next update!

I LOVE Rocky Horror, my local theatre company puts it on every year and does a great job. I can't wait to see how Edward reacts and I love the idea of Emmett as Rocky

Edward. Bike. Leather. Gah.

Emmett. Donkey dong. Gold panties. Gah a deux!

Edward is distant, mysterious, vague, intense, and too quiet. Please tell him to give us a hint about his story...why is he in LA, why will he leave, and is he nursing a secret heartache? Or at least a big scar under his hair?  Was he in a car wreck and killed somebody, maybe his girlfriend?? 

THanks for the update!!

Nice banner. Please tell your banner maker that she/he forgot to draw in Edward's big peen. >:>

P.S. How does Bella stay so skinny if she eats 2 breakfasts? :)

Author's Response:

fast metabolism. 

I thought Twiighted might have issues if I drew Mr. Big & Pretty in all his glory.

Edward will start opening up a little.  Soon.

Can't wait for the next chapter.  I am really enjoying this story.  Keep going.

Very good chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how she got the scars apparently in Phoenix? And what is Edward doing in town?? Oh, so is it true then Bella did not sleep with Emmet they just couldn't get that into it and people at the school started the rumors they were?

Author's Response:

Yes, Bella got the scars in Phoenix.  Yes, Bella and Emmett didn't sleep together, others started those rumors.  I'm not telling yet why Edward is in L.A.

This story is awesome I love it so much :D

seemed more of a transitional chapter..setting up stage for the future,i'm guessing..nice rhythm to the story, tho

aw that was soooo sweet. i liked that twist. he just wants a painting in exchange for him modeling for her. i don't know why but i was really happy about that. it actually caught me off guard. you'd think it wouldn't because dugh she is a painter and a talented one at that so why wouldn't he ask for that? yet it was nice. good job and can't wait to read chapt 5.

ROCKY HORROR!!!! Hell yes! Update soon!