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Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:28 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
It sounds like things are working themselves out now for our protagonists. I could always use more of this fic.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:00 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
wow jaspers an ass. why couldnt bella just enjoy waking up in edwards arms? is that too much to ask? thank goodness for emmet in this story. i loved that bella went toe to toe with jaz it was nice to not take shit from him. anyway great chapter, more edward and bella please, and i want to hear what jaz and alice discussed.
Reviewer: vamplicious (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:58 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
I agree with Emmet. Your Bella-character is awesome! Great writing!
Looking forward to that EPOV. That should be interesting.
Keep up the good work! :)
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:52 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
I just so love this story and look so forward to each update! But I admit that I'm getting kinda frustrated about the Bella and Edward situation! Its like one step forward, two steps back. When are they every going to get together?
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:49 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
very interesting chapter!
Reviewer: chewychan (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:21 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
I love this story!
It's so strangely innocent but not at the same time, if that makes sense. It's definitely one of my DEAR - EFC (drop everything and read - except for class) stories these past couple months. Yay!
Can't wait for the next chapter, and the chapter after that, and the... you get the jist.
Cheers!
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:27 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
AWWWW!!!! you tricked me!! I really thought that we would see some "developments" in this relationship from the close proximity of their sleeping arrangements. But alas, I am bereft and will await the next update with bated breath. I have been reading too many romance novels of late, can u tell?
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:58 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
Great chapter! Write more soon!
Reviewer: victoriajoy (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:49 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
That outtake can't come soon enough! That guy has me so baffled, can't wait to hear his side!
Love your story.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:49 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
interesting now it is all coming out in the open. emmets take is very different then jasper. loved the chapter
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 03:29 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
Ah, thank you soooo much for the explanation from an outside source. Lovely bit o' Emmett.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:47 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
Wow the scene with Jasper was intense. I hope that Edward doesn't turn out to be as big of a jerk as he is being made out to be. Bella deserves to be happy! Love this one! More please and soon!
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:46 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
Loved this chapter and wish that Bella would go after what she wants instead of waiting for Edward, I think he knows what he wants but is afraid of her rejection.
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 02:37 AM · On: 13 Rauschenberg
I am still confused as to Jaspers deal and why he is so involved with everyone's business and I am also still unsure as to what Edward is really thinking or doing at this point. Completely unsure whereas in most stories I can get a good read if it isn't made blatantly obvious to the reader by this point so this is intriguing if not mildly frustrating. :)
Reviewer: concarr1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:44 PM · On: 12 Lichtenstein
LOving your story so far!! I am really perplexed by your Edward. He is very different than most of the other portrayals out there. I am very intruiged....
Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see an update!
Reviewer: fanpire98 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 04:43 PM · On: 12 Lichtenstein
is there more?
Author's Response: when we reach the end of the story you won't miss it.
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 03:13 PM · On: 12 Lichtenstein
Damn...if he hops on thatbike and just takes off I am gonna be so PISSED....
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 06:44 PM · On: 12 Lichtenstein
I love the snuggling, and I can't wait for more. It's so obvious they are into each other. I wish they would just hurry up and realize or ackowledge it.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 06:34 PM · On: 11 Millais
I'm glad we're getting some backstory, but I hate how slow these two are going! Sexual tension is good but painful at the same time.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 06:15 PM · On: 10 Caravaggio
Jasper needs to get the stick out of his ass, or I'm going to pull it out for him! *lol*
Seriously loving this story
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 05:59 PM · On: 9 Picasso
Jessica's pregnant! Haha! That's certainly more fun than Bella. Still wondering about Edward... Tanya grates on my nerves.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 05:47 PM · On: 8 Rembrandt
Ugh! Still no answers! I have to say, you're killing me here!
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 05:38 PM · On: 7 Grosz
Edward is truly a man of mystery at this point. I can't for the life of me figure this one out. Hopefully, you'll tell us soon.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 05:13 PM · On: 6 Kirchner
Rocky Horror! I'm loving' it! Really great chapter! I can't wait to see how this goes down.
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 04:50 PM · On: 5 Manet
I had all kinds of wonderful thoughts about this chapter, but I lost them all with Jasper's little comment there at the end. WTF?
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