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Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 10:17 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
I've spent like...Three days getting caught up. This story is amazing, and I am just wowed by all of it. Bella really has seemed to change from the beginning, she got tougher as her relationship with Edward deepened. I hope for damn sure that boy will get his shit together on his trip and think whether or not he wants Tanya or Bella. Update soon.
Reviewer: Purple Akua (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 02:07 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
This is a wonderful story!! Even though your Bella's personality is far from canon, I feel like I really know her and feel for her. You've also done a fantastic job of putting a lot of detail into the story, both art and non-art related. But I can't believe that after everything that's happened that Edward would think she wants to box him in like Tanya wanted to do! I am usually a fan of the fated stories, but I actually like the mystery of this one; I really have no idea if they'll end up together or not! Very excited for more!!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 03:47 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
whihle Edward rides off into the sunset, i'm wondering what's in store for Bella.
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 01:07 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
oh sweet jesus, she said it, damn. And ugh yea we all figured he'd hav a shit fit, but i think secretly we were all waiting for him to go all ohh Bella I love u 2. Hehehehe childish I know, but its just there under the surface. anyway enough rambling, as always a fabulous chapter (even if it was a tad short)
Gem
Reviewer: wendyms (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 12:15 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Wow..I stayed up all night reading this one..can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:55 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Great chapter. What's Edward's problem. I'm thinking he's in love with Bellla too but he can't handle it.
Reviewer: fallon586 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 06:12 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
ugh! finally! there are so many emotions running through me....that was amazing and i can't wait for more. this story reminds me so much of my days in art school. thank you for writing it.
Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:22 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
this hurts...
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:10 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Fucking tears the whole damn chapter, you kill me every time! Love your story so much, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: penguin1802 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 04:12 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
i don't read much fan fiction but this story has me engrossed. i see aspects of myself in the way you've written Bella. this is a lovely story and i'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: Rebecca Rage (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 12:50 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
i cant wait for the next chapter....
Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:31 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Love your realism. Life isn´t always HEA and some times you love someone who doesn´t love you back. It hurts like hell but you live. I do however have a bit of hope for the arty couple if he can realise that not all love has to tie you down... The best kind in my book :-)
Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 08:11 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
And now i'm crying.....Geez...But i was a good chapter
And to be honest....We knew it...From the beginning.......*Sigh*
Can't wait for your udpate then because i'm dying to know when he's gonna come back ;)
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 07:57 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Oh, so sad... I'm glad this isn't the end.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:57 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
so, so sad, Edward should have put some more effort into trying to talk to her, but that's not his way; please update soon
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:38 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
GAAAAAAAAAAAAA
MUST
KNOW
WHAT
COMES
NEXT!!!!! DX
my heart just broke :( please update soon!!!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 02:43 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
So Sad !!! he will come back ? i hope so
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 01:11 AM · On: 18 O'Keefe
I adore this story and although there are gaps between updates, it is always worth the wait and I would never give up on my art fix!
My heart feels a little heavy after this chapter, but I'm relieved to hear the next one will be up very soon.
Thank you for sharing your memories with us. x
Reviewer: tracey1520 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 11:03 PM · On: 12 Lichtenstein
Omg that banana part cracked me up so much! Loved it and I LOVE her character in this story! She is TOO funny!!! =D
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:18 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
amaaazing
love it
cant wait for more!
Oxo
Reviewer: Angelisa (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:17 PM · On: 17 Pollock
Hey did you go to one of the Claremont Colleges or were they just in the right place for your story? I went to CMC... it was fun to read about places I recognized.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:06 PM · On: 11 Millais
I'm enjoying your story immensely!
I had to comment on Versailles' chicken and plaintains--oh my heck that brought back memories of an excellent trip to LA a few years ago. It was some of the best food I'd ever put in my mouth.
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:33 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Well, it was what I was expecting, but it was still so hard to read about Bella's heartbreak.
I wonder when Edward will realize his mistake...
Reviewer: acullen905 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:28 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
I love reading this story!! You've done a great job writing it!! Just wondering why your not updating like you use to? Please for my sanity...try and update more often!!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:00 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
great chapter! update soon!
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