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Reviewer: fargoner (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:09 AM · On: 19 Freud
Love your story. This chapter made me cry! :=0( You make it so real. Hope you update soon...
Reviewer: Rebecca Rage (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:09 PM · On: 19 Freud
So sad after this one. I love that you can write the hard stuff and well as the fluffyness and lemons... Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Becca
Reviewer: GoldyBouldingTales (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:01 PM · On: 19 Freud
Awesome!! Update ASAP, I'm hooked on this story O_O
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 07:07 AM · On: 19 Freud
This story is addicting. And a wonderful read- I love your Bella! The majority of stories I read have her as this frail, sweet, needs-to-be-taken-care-of girl but I like that your Bella is the opposite.
I also love learning about all the art stuff-I wish I could see all those Edward paintings!
And Edward got beat up? my hunch is on Paul... I can't wait to read more of this story! Thank you for posting and happy writing!
Sofia
Reviewer: sammies (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 04:56 PM · On: 16 Heim
Awsome fanfic love it!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 08:43 AM · On: 19 Freud
The heartache is palpable in this chapter. And the way in which Bella tries to deny the coming pain, to just absorb and move on is really affecting. Everyone knows what that feels like, the dread in the pit of your stomach, the tightness in your throat-you try to stop it from coming, but something inane will trigger it. And Edward's reaction, it's his own avoidance. Bella just can't see it yet.
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 04:26 AM · On: 19 Freud
motherfucking Edward, jesus, lol i really hate him at the moment even tho we all love him. ugh poor bells, def no fair, anyway fabulous writing, and so can't wait for another update
Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:00 PM · On: 19 Freud
Wow. Just wow. I can feel the emotion running through Bella. And like others have mentioned it makes me want to pick up my drawing pencils - I took classes in college and loved it.
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:30 PM · On: 18 O'Keefe
Touching chapter. So sad. Edward's emo emotions are really screwed up and cold. His character comes across as being very cold and broken. I would love to read what he wrote after the wedding. Does his behavior mirror his thoughts, or are his thoughts 180 degrees opposite of his behavior? Is it only lust for Bella, or does he have deeper feelings and is afraid of trying a relationship with her? You've written him so well that it's hard to tell what's going on below the surface with his thoughts.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:11 PM · On: 19 Freud
Reading this on and off from 7:00 Sun to 1:00 Mon.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:55 PM · On: 17 Pollock
I'm all shook up.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 10:06 AM · On: 14 Schiele
That was great!!!
Reviewer: twilightobssessedmom (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:57 AM · On: 19 Freud
So who beat up Edward?!! Hopefully it was for Bella!!! He deserved that. Poor Bella, now she has all those paintings of him all over the place and she has to see them all the time. He doesn't even want his painting from her anymore? That was a cruel text to send her. Very cold!! Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:20 AM · On: 11 Millais
lov it
Reviewer: sulin0105 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:07 AM · On: 19 Freud
this just about broke my heart. pls update soon!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:33 AM · On: 9 Picasso
I lost this story, glad to have found it.
Reviewer: Pirri (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:35 AM · On: 19 Freud
So sad what happend to Jessica but Bella was a good friend to her even if she doesn't really like her as a person.
I still believe what I said before about Edward. He doesn't know what he wants and is too scared to let himself really want things. And I'm guessing it was Jasper that tried to rrearrange Edwards face. I would really love an insight into what Edward is doing at the moment and what he's thinking now on his 'journey of self discovery' - probably deliberately not thinking about things I'm guessing.
Loving this perspective of Bella. So much stronger than New Moon Bella but still feeling the pain. I really feel for her but I'm glad, out of it she's still going forward with her scholarship application and her art show. Can't wait for the art show.
Love these quick chapters (that's becasue I'm greedy) can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: EMILIE00 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 03:11 AM · On: 19 Freud
this a great climax to what has been a terrific story - moving, realistic
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:58 AM · On: 19 Freud
wow. this chapter was pretty heart wrenching but not for the reasons that id expect. im glad that bella stopped being such a bitch to jessica and opened her mind to her situation. and i really like the ending here.... it just works so perfectly :)
cant wait to see the return of edward or maybe the visit of bella? lol w/e it is cant wait!
<3's for you!!!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:20 AM · On: 19 Freud
Glad to see Edward was affected by what happened. And that Bella was humbled by realizing Edward had changed her.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 01:36 AM · On: 19 Freud
Edward should get his act together. That text was so impersonal, he should know what it would convey to Bella. I'm dying to know what he did beween leaving Bella and leaving the city. Why are his friends so reluctant to give Bella some info? They are her friends, too.
I feel so sorry for Jessica, too. Paul is the worst - getting her pregnant, dumping her, hitting on Bella, already another girl by his side .....
Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 10:04 PM · On: 19 Freud
oy vey...
Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 09:52 PM · On: 19 Freud
oh this makes my heart ache...I wish I could paint it...
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 09:32 PM · On: 19 Freud
awww, this chapter sucked.:( Poor Jessica, EVIL EVIL Paul whose dick must fall off, and Bella....aaah, the emotional toll of the last weeks has finally caught up with her. Edward is a dick - pining, drunk and emo for her, while pretending to be off exploring the essence from within??? gah! What a douche. Get over the whole Kerouac thing already, Emoward, and dump the bitch that wronged you and move toward the light! The lighe being Bella and all. :) gah!
I would love to see Emmett's knitten monstrosities. Do you have any pics of things like that??? I am intrigued!
Poor Momma Kitty. Sniffle. :(
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 08:32 PM · On: 19 Freud
This story is amazing. So realistic and raw. Please bring Ed back. We miss him, too.
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