Oh please say this isn't over yet.  I want sooooo much for Edward to tell Tanya he does not love her and for him to tell Bella he does love her. They need to be together!  I love this story!  You are an awesome writer.  you put everything together so well...but please make it a HEA!!!

I hope I am on the update list.  My email is: patte@ktc.com

Thank you!

xo   p

Author's Response:

thank you, but I have no control over the update list.

Great story.  I can't wait to see where it goes.  Do you know how many chapters the story is going to be?

I'm glad Bella looked up the website. She may still be hurt and upset, but at least she knows now he didn't think she would love him. And she knows he can't be free without her.

i love your story but now i appreciate it much more! i loved the way you wrote out their feelings of wanting to live through their art. i feel that passion everyday in my performing and it was great being reminded of this beloved wish. thanks for a great story

I feel like we are travelling down a road where these two inch toward salvation to each other.  But, I think it is and will be a long journey.  I love the way it is developing though and hope that it is as fulfilling for you as it is to your readers.  Great job.

 

E

Interesting blog entries.  I think Bella has a right to be angry and confused, even in reading E's writing because he doesn't seem like he understands what's going on either.  I love the descriptions of B's self-portraits.

Hope they are reunited soon!

-Melanie

It's so sad to see Bella and Edward so heartbroken. They're both doing what they planned - Edward on the road and Bella going to Nort Carolina - but they can't enjoy it because they are apart.

First...I"m so glad you're back and feeling better!!!!  I've missed this story so much!

I really enjoyed getting a glimpse inside Edward's head.  Using a blog is such a clever way to let us know what's been going on and how he's been feeling without having to hash out every single moment since he left Bella!

And Bella's sefl portrait.  It's really interesting to see how she sees herself. When you first mentioned it the very first thing that popped into my head was how sad she was going to look.  So I'm glad I was on the right track!  I kept trying to imagine what else she would see.....such as only half of her was there (a little cheesiness, as if Edward was her other half), or maybe her heart crumbled/or missing), etc.  it got a little emo, so I'll stop here.

Anyways, I loved this update and I can't wait for the next one =)

I love transitions chapters when you write them!! Normally they suck but yours are very good. 

I hope your feeling better. Now I feel like an ass for being grumpy that you didn't update. But hey, that's just how much I love you and stuff. :D

update soon!

This story is one of my favorite in the way it portrays human complexity. This is the most realistic, and one of the best, stories I have ever read, and not only on Twilighted, or fanfiction, but ever.   Frankly, I'm obsessed.  Please, please, please update soon! It could make my month. 

Well I'm not really mad @ Edward even if I feel I should be. I feel like I understand him a little more now. Great chapter.

Always glad to know Edwards POV. Thank you. Now hurry and get him back.