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Reviewer: jenteal88 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Deuteronomy 30:19

:'( It was ridiculous of me wanting them to be together

Poor Jasper

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

OMFJ!!! Wow, I was not expecting this at all, and not from Papa Hale. I'm utterly speachless...

Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

ack. why would you end it there?!?!?!!?

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

Whoa.....nice twist.

Reviewer: violaislove2789 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

I'm confused as to what was said in the last chapter at the end. Did Jasper turn in Rev. Hale or was it meant to be foreshadowing? 

 

Regardless, amazing.

As always :).



Author's Response:

foreshadowing, of sorts :)

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

Eagerly anticipated Jasper showing up at her door... why does it have to be a cliffy?!

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

Wow.  Just about too painful for words.  I'm glad Edward and Emmatt are going to check on Rose, but Jasper showing up at Bella's door will not go well, will it?

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:14 PM · On: John 4:18

aghhhhhh! i dont know if i can read any farther. i want...no i NEED jasper and bella to stay together. you dont, by chance, have an alternate ending do you? cuz that would be really fantastic.

btw i really truly love your writing. you have a great, easy to read [read: not pompous] style and it made me think you should write your own original fiction. i would love to but a copy ;]

<3

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

well thats a shocker

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:55 PM · On: 1 Peter 2:1

oh no! i may have to quit...im not feeling edward and bella anymore. i just want it to stay jasper and bella

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Timothy 2:14

there is a triangle: awww, damn!, and sadness and i am in the middle. but i am glad they finally did, i mean geez, took long enough :]

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Peter 4:8

i think i may have to stop when it gets to be edward and bella....other than that this chapter was a rousing success! btw you must be awesome because i never review this much for anyone!

<3



Author's Response:

i totally know how you feel... but idk, i'd recommend you don't stop...you'd be missing some crazy action down the line. Maybe just skim!?

 

And thanks for all your reviews :)

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:27 PM · On: James 1:26

serious about playlists...nice

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Peter 1:14

wow-----------> me <----holy f--k! it would be a lie to say that im in btwn when i am so obviously leaning towards holy f--k. you write great sex(ual things) and i wish i was bella....desperately

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Job 14:4

im caught somewhere between awww and fuck yes!

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Proverbs 24:7

I hate Rosalie. But its not your fault, Ive never read a Rose I liked...

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Timothy 2:22

Number 1: I LOVe southern men. My boyfriend when I lived in GA was born and breed there and the "humor line" was spot on. I couldn't even pay for a gumball if I was with him! :]

Number 2: I am most definitely pretending to be Bella during all these make out scenes. Lucky bitch.

Number 3: Last lines=epic

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:48 PM · On: James 3:16

girls, girls, girls...rule :]

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Exodus 20:12

I don't even know what to say except awesome! So when I leave one word reviews from now on, its not because I don't like it, its because I like it so much I dont have time to leave a full review, I have to read! :]

<3

Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

Oh my God!!   I can't believe it.

Poor Rosalie.

Hurry and put part 2 up please!

-Jessica

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Job 31:1112

If Jasper was kissing me, I'd be in a daze too :] Wow! That last part was really freaking hot :] I am head over heels for this story, I may skip classes tomorrow to read it ;]

<3

Reviewer: Liana Kay (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

WOW.  Totally didn't see that one coming.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:01 PM · On: John 8:32

Hmm...getting very interesting :)

<3

Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 01:05 PM · On: I Corinthians 13:4

yay! great chapter

<3

Reviewer: bellobella (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Ephesians 5:11-13

omg!

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