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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 08:22 PM · On: The Night in the Park
man jake should'vew known this was coming! he is just too childish
Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:42 PM · On: The Night in the Park
WTF JACOB BETTER NOT HAVE HIT HER-THATS NOT HIM-IDONT LIKE THAT U MADE HIM INTO A WOMAN BEATER!!! I HOPE THATS NOT THE CASE!!!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 07:26 PM · On: The Night in the Park
what the crap?! cant wait to find out what happened. hurry up! hahaha
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:16 PM · On: The Night in the Park
OK, didn't like that Jacob hit Bella...very OOC
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:16 PM · On: The Night in the Park
OK, didn't like that Jacob hit Bella...very OOC
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:15 PM · On: The Night in the Park
OK, didn't like that Jacob hit Bella...very OOC
Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Another Rainy Afternoon
I like it so far...time to read the next chapter
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 01:59 AM · On: The Night in the Park
omg jacob hit her?! you have my attention please update soon this story is so good. i wanna know what happens
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 03:20 PM · On: Prologue
oh PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!
Reviewer: Meme (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 07:40 PM · On: The Night in the Park
I like the idea here, but I think the chapters need to be longer. I am definitely curious about what happens next so good job.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 01:08 PM · On: The Night in the Park
Dang Jacob!! OK, if he was standing a few feet away from her how could he hit her? I mean I know that he would have a long arm span, but he would have to be standing closer to her to have hit her. Great chapter btw!! Anxious to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm sorry that I didn't make that really specific. I was trying to do it from Bella's point of view and I think I may have left out details in the process. She didn't notice Jake move that fast. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 02:06 AM · On: The Night in the Park
I have to know what happens now, I hope that you update soon!!
Reviewer: im your density (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 12:21 AM · On: The Night in the Park
wow. i wouldnt think that jacob would do something like that!
Reviewer: Edward-vs-Jacob (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 11:48 PM · On: The Night in the Park
omg omg omg aahhhhh update soon i don't like to wait!
Reviewer: dramaqueen194980 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 09:37 PM · On: The Night in the Park
Jacob hit Bella. I am so confused! Please update soon!!
Reviewer: EdwardsGirl1117 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 12:02 PM · On: Plans for Saturday
love it! keep writting!
Reviewer: Sabz (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 08:41 PM · On: Plans for Saturday
i think its great but your chapters are too short make them longer but very good
Author's Response: i had a lot of trouble with the first bunch of chapters. it was hard to make them good and substantial. i dont know why, it is just that way sometimes. luckily ive been doing a lot of work and the next chapters are going to be much longer. i worked on one that is currently about twelve pages of handwritten rough draft. it will be neatened up for you and published quite soon. i really appreciate that you took the time to review
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 12:53 AM · On: Plans for Saturday
She'll always be daddy's little girl.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 12:44 AM · On: Prologue
Awww! Kinda sad. I'm all Team Edward, but Jacob always held a special place in my heart!
Author's Response: That's exactly how I feel. I actually wrote this because that's where I'm sort of coming from. GMTA! ♥
Reviewer: Edward-vs-Jacob (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 11:27 PM · On: Plans for Saturday
awwwww its so cute I'm really glad someone wrote a fanfic about bella and jacob cuz he's my favorite!!! Update soon!!
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 10:05 PM · On: Plans for Saturday
I'm really enjoying this story, curious to see where it goes. So, Victoria's not hunting her now? Where does this story start from?
Author's Response: Another part of the AU (itll come up later) is that Victoria stays away longer after Laurent is killed. Fits my story perfectly (ahhh the beauty of AU). Thanks so much for caring to review!
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