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Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 13
aww poor alice! i hope the baby is okay! update soon please!!
Author's Response: Just finished chapter 14 and submitted it for validation. Should be up soon! ^_^
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 13
please let alice and the baby survive..... this was such an intense chapter! i really was not expecting it.. but i guess i should expect the unexpected for this story right.. anyway great job can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! =]
Author's Response: Thanks hun! I finished the next chapter and am submitting it tonight. And as far as Alice and the baby...well....um......OH LOOK! IT'S ROBERT PATTINSON *Ashley runs away quickly*
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 13
Yes, you sure are evil sometimes! You know better than to kill a pregnant woman on this site! :-) Aching for Jasper, at this point! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out what happens. Yes, that's my way of keeping you reading. I'm submitting the next chapter tonight ^_^ *hugs*
Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
your chapter playlists are AWEOMSE!!!
the story is GREAT!!!!
keep it up and update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks doll! I am finishing chapter 14 as we speak! I will be submitting it tonight. ^_^ *hugs*
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 13
no!!!!!!!!! Not alice! :'(
Keep on writing please!!!! :) :)
I have a hunch on how the prologue comes up but I won't say anything
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter 14 right now. And please feel free to email me, I would love to hear your theory!! ^_^
Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Prologue
AHHHH! holy CRAP!
Author's Response: Hehe, welcome to my little story. You might have a few of those moments. ^_~ Enjoy, doll!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
Is it me or has any one forgotten that Bella is taking (or should be with the gunshot wound) antibiotics and the #1 thing about them is that they practically render birthcontrol pills null and void. Hummmmm...wonder which way the scales will go. I hope to babyland
Author's Response: LOL. You are too good! But I can tell you that I thought of that, and I don't think I'll have Bella getting pregnant. With the whole captured and tortured thing, it wouldn't end well.
Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 12
evil cliffie!
so far,way good. awesome!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry. I'm pretty evil about doing cliffies sometimes. Thanks for the review, doll! ^_^
Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 12
just to let you know......
THIS IS AMAZING!!
Author's Response: Thanks doll! ^_^ I'm working on the next chapter right now.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 12
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: The next chapter won't be up until early next week. I'm writing it right now and I'm really liking how it's coming out. Just keep checking back! ^_^
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 12
AHHHHHH!!!! They found him?! this is soooo exciting!! omfj!! please continue the peedy updates!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter won't be up as fast as the others. My beta is taking a well deserved vacation and won't be available to validate the next chapter. This is the only time I will leave you hanging for a while. Sorry, doll!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 12
OH! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: The next chapter won't be up until early next week. My beta is taking a much needed vacation and won't be available to validate. I will have the next chapter up on ff.net before it is up on here. I hate pushing people over there though, but it will be there first.
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
No!!!! U did not just leave me a cliffie!!!!!
I am expected a chapter really soon for that mistake! lol. Your story is fabulous! I really like how you wrote the prologue and I am excited to see when that prologue comes into to play. I love how you write Edward and bella and how you write the FBI stuff. I really want to know what the fuck happens with her dad! Keep those chapters coming :)
Author's Response: Sorry! I had to end the chapter there otherwise it would have gone into a huge interigation scene. And my beta told me that she is going out of town for the weekend, so I won't have the next chapter up until she gets back from her mini vaca. I am working on the chapter and I do post on ff.net as well. As much as I hate driving people over there, I will probably have it up there first. thank you for the wonderful review! I promise I will make up for the cliffie with the next chapter.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
they got him??!! thats good now things are going to start getting interesting in the work area.. because they are already on fire in the personal area haha... anyway great chapter... i can't wait for the next one! =]
Author's Response: Hehe, one bad guy captured. Who knows how many to go. Thanks for the review doll! I adore you! ^_^
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Prologue
Holy shit. Her father?!?!?
Jeez good fucking prologue!!!!!
I am soo interested
Author's Response: Thanks doll! I hope you enjoy the rest of what I have up so far! Let me know what you think ^_^
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
the writing tempo was perfect for the fast paced sex and the sputering i love yous
Author's Response: Thanks dollface! You know I love ya too!! ^_^
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks doll!! ^_^
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 11
WOW! Awww! and OMG!
Awesome chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks darlin! I just finished chapter 12! I am sending it to my beta ASAP!! **hugs**
Reviewer: pillow912 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 11
Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks doll!! ^_^
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
i am so happy for them!!! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Working on it right now!! ^_^ thanks for the review doll!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm enjoying reading this story. I can't wait till the plot thickens n know how she got her hands on the folders n see how bella's dad is involved.
Author's Response: Things will start to get a bit more interesting around chapter 13. I wanted to keep it slightly fluffy for a little bit because t's going to get darker, very soon. And when I say dark, I mean dark. I read a lot of Dean Koontz novels, and that guy is messed up in the head. We're kindred spirits really ^_~
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
WOOHOO that was too awesome! i cant wait for the next one :)
 
Author's Response: Thanks doll! The next chapter should be up in the next few days. I'm sending it to my beta tonight ^_^
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
:D Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: ^_^ the next chapter is getting sent to my beta tonight
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was so sweet, I really loved it. Of course we already knew they would love each other from the prologue, but it's fun to see how they get there. Have a great weekend in Dallas, looking forward to seeing what our heroes get into next!
Author's Response: Thank you doll! I had fun in Dallas, but i am so ready to get the next few chapters going and up! Thanks for the review! I cherish them. I am sending the next chapter to my beta tonight ^_^
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
I loved it
Author's Response: Thanks hun! I am sending the next chapter to my beta tonight ^_^
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