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Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 18
HS!!! OM this is gonna start getting all action movie like. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes it is my dear! Yes it is ^_~
Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 18
I understand the instinct of a woman's jealousy, but why is Tanya always the bad one in stories?
Mere curiousity. Still quite an awesome story. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: LOL! I know. I fell right into that one. I needed a female and since I already used Victoria, she was the next one that popped into my mind. But I totally get where you're coming from. ^_~
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 18
I just knew Tanya was up to no good! Can't wait for the enxt one!
Author's Response: Yeah, a few people called it. Very perseptive! Working on the next chapter right now. ^_^
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
oh boy... i can't wait for the next chapter! this is getting intense! please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Working on it right now doll!! ^_^
Reviewer: bloomingdale (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 18
fuck fuck fuuuuckkk..
excuse my french ;)
but that was bloody awesome!
Author's Response: Consider your french excused ^_~ But you shouldn't worry, I've used worse. Most of it is actually in this story ^_^
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 18
:| noooo.
Author's Response: sorry......but you know I still love ya right??
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 18
yes its a cliffie but this is an action story and they are chock full of them
Author's Response: And I'm horrible about cliffies aren't I? ^_~
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 18
Hope your move went well, thanks for the new chapter, I enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thanks darlin! The move went pretty well. AZ is better than WY, just wish my job didn't suck...oh well. I'm working on the next chapter right now ^_^
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 18
great chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks doll! I'm working on it! ^_^
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 17
I can't believe this story doesn't have more comments! You're doing a good job with it. I'm awaiting the next update! :)
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 17
Good Luck with the move, hope it goes smoothly so don't have to wait too long for the next update to this fab fic.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 17
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! nooooo!! oh. my. god!! is the next chappie where the preface comes in?? i wonder....
oh my baby jebus please update as soooon as you can. you have NO idea how much i loooove your story!! keep it up!!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
Hey, I hope your move to AZ goes like clockwork, thanks for the new chapter to tide us over! Loved it as usual!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17
Wow... I had wondered what situation they had gotten into that would have Edward getting injured. I am curious tho... is Tanya also a double agent?
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 17
i think Tanya is yet again a bad person workin for Charlie
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh fudge bucket! Now its Edward :P well... i cant wait for the next chapter :) and good luck with the move and stay safe :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 17
THANK GOD FOR THE PROLOGUE! because if not i would have been freaking out right now... i mean i'm still kinda jittery but not as bad of this was a cliffie that would have just left me think the worst... anyway please get internet back and update soon!!!!!!!
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 16
WOW this chapter was intence :o
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 16
Love the story... can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 16
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 16
And I made their banner too. heehee. Still lovin it and hot over the beat down Bella gave Victoria. rightious
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
I really hope they don't get to rose!
Will Tanya be the bitch in this story or is she nice? Will she ever try to get edward?
I hate tanya so I really hope she doesn't do anything.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I will tell ya right now, Tanya won't make a play for Edward. I wouldn't be able to write that since I hate triangles. I would be banging my head into the desk the whole time ^_~
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 16
It seems like Victoria's been treated with the virus already? Bella should know better! At least she got a few good swings in! Love your story, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Or has she?? *insert evil laugh here* I just love keeping you guessing. I'm a horrible person ^_~ I am working on the next chapter right now and I hope I can get it don'e before I move on Friday. EEEEEEEEEEK
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 16
I'm sorry you had computer problems. Eww. And thanks for not doing the whole love triangle thing with Tanya; I hate those too!
Good chapter.
Author's Response: No prob. I hate love triangles. For the most part, they don't really serve a purpose. But I brought Tanya in for other things. ^_~
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 16
that really sucks that bella has to lie to edward.. but i really hope that doesn't bite her in the ass in the future... but thank you for not involving a love triangle in this story.. those are so annoying because in my opinion they take the focus away from the story at hand.. unless that triangle plays an important role in the plot [which most of the time it doesn't].. but great job and i can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I totally agree about the love triangles. I see no point in having one since B&E have already professed their love for each other. I am working on the next chapter right now. I am hoping I can get it done before I move on Friday. Thanks for the great review doll! *hugs*
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