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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh hell honey your gonna kill me with all of this. Luca sounds uber sexy but whats happening with Edward has me on edge...bits fingernails nervously...
Poor Edward thinkin Liliana's death was all his doing. I hope he doesn't give up any time soon.
I will anxiously await your next update...please don't leave me hanging to long
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
Holy Hale! *takes shaky breath* It may be 1am here but I can't stop reading. This is just to interesting.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
*gasp* Poor Edward...such a trying time. Caius is pure evil and I hope Bella belts him one for his cruelty.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ahh the pain of everyone involved. Poor Bella having to hear about her father. The Cullen's loosing their son, and reading of Edward's pain.
Sigh...to say I am intrigued is an understatment
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 5
OH the heartfelt tears...sniff...I want to cry to after reading of Carlisle's tears.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
Sticking with you my dear...insanly curious
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Jesus Freakin Christ! Bella gets to retreive Edward...I'm hidding in her luggage =)
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Holy Hale! Bella makes an awesome undercover agent. What a vixen she can be.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1
whoa intriguing
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 8
awfully short
Reviewer: jonesiia (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is a great story but it's a bit slow and hard to keep interest but a great read none the less. Keep up the good work!!!
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh no poor Edward :(
poor Bella for having to be basically someone's slave....Sad day
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 8
So far so good, Isabella/Bella is a pro at this and her acting is fooling Luca. Damn, this is getting good (though what happened to Edward... *cringe* He'll have those scars forever...)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
Hey totally like how much information u are holding back it adds to all the suspence =] and i love where this story is going =]
Reviewer: amaranth (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 8
is she going to have to sleep with him? I sure hope not!
:D I love the story so far, it's very sexy and intriguing. I've seen others with similar concepts (Bella femme fatale rescues Edward) but I found your to be more interesting. Pls please, do finish this story! :D
Reviewer: Marily (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 8
Too short!!!! Really good, I want more!
Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
What? No EPOV!??? It was still a good chapter though ;]
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
I thought the end was kinda hot.
Reviewer: shannigal911 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
please update soon!! i love this ff sooooo much!
Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more. Great story so far.
Reviewer: aaa (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
great work!!
its very interesting
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
THANK GOD Bella is finally there!!! Now where's poor Edward?? The poor guy is NOT having good time is he?? xx
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ouch! Damn that is severe.
Reviewer: Starla ann grace (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 7
wow ok Grr I can't wait to see what happens next. So far so good you've got me hooked. Don't leave me hangin please.
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