Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Unsafe
so good:)
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Unsafe
What's really funny is that my name is Margie. Now I can fantasize that Edward was thanking me for taking good care of him! Too bad Margie didn't get to smear the ointment on his face.
Oh crud, Bella is in trouble. I hope she doesn't protest too much after Edward explains that the assassin is now tailing her. She especially is not safe. She's the witness. First they try to scare her when crazy father showed up at the cafe and at the disbarment hearing; then they sent a strong message by trying to take out her boyfriend; and now they're most likely planning to hurt her - all to get her to back off on testifying. And this accident doesn't quite fit the vision Bella had, so I am expecting more threats to come their way.
Author's Response: The name wasn't an accident. Thanks for sticking with me, reviewing consistently, and visiting the forum.
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Oh, I'm definitely with Julie on this one, I really hope that wasn't foreshadowing. However, with the history of Bella's dreams about Edward, I think it is. Just don't be too hard on us, 'kay? Pretty please with a cherry decorated face on top?
Reviewer: amye1987 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
You're killing me! I was hoping from the title that he made it back safe, but you haven't told us yet! I'm so afraid that something will happen and they won't end up together! ):
Reviewer: amye1987 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
You're killing me! I was hoping from the title that he made it back safe, but you haven't told us yet! I'm so afraid that something will happen and they won't end up together! ):
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Gosh, I really hope that it is just a bad dream!
I love the meeting with the mom. I met my mother-in-law when my hubby decided to show up at my house and she drove us to his brother's hockey practice.
Reviewer: djjajacool (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
a silver tongue is interestin i have been reading it lol and your story is amazing
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Loved it... as usual! :)
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
What? Need an update now! lol Excellent story! :O)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Another great chapter...the evolution of bella has been tremendous!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
i love this story, but i feel bella needs to get over her insecurities when it comes to edward. i understand where shes coming from, but he loves her so much!
funny chapter; the omelete made me laugh! lookin' forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: adriana05 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
OH NO! EDWARD CRASH DIDN'T HE? DAMN I ALREADY KNOW IT! THIS CHAPTER SEEM SO SHORT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON IM SO HOOK! THIS STORY IS JUST AWESOME!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
that was greally great, i loved the decorated breakfast was so funny. i can't wait for then next chapter
Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
oh no, something happened to edward and that's why she had the dream, shoot >.<
Love the story! (:
update soon(:
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 25 - The Storm
I looooved this chapter! It was perfect!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
It was nice to hear from Bella's pov. Thanks!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Awwww, sweet :) Glad that meeting Elizabeth went so smoothly for Bella. If only Edward's father could be less of an ass. Major giggles at Edward's decorated omelete and I too am a bit creeped out by Bella's dream.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Great hearing Bella's POV of the Sunday brunch with Edward's mother. The two women got along because they both love the same man. They both are loving people. I bet some of the stories of Edward as a child would have been so darling to hear. I liked the story of waffles with fruit faces. Then to be teased about a face on his omelet. Just too funny, a grown man with a smiley face on his breakfast food. Then to have his girlfriend and his mother tease him about it too. Bella needs to speak up about wanting to be with Edward every night. Edward wants her to as well. Both are afraid to mention it. Bella doesn't want to out stay her welcome. While Edward doesn't want her to ever leave his house again. Bella feels that way but afraid to express it. The evening nightmare was pretty scary about Edward being the body she trips over and he is covered in blood. Is this some foreshadowing of what is to come shortly? Is James' father going to put a hit on Edward for his testimony? If she ever tells Edward about the dream and her desire to call him when she awoke and didn't Edward isn't going to be happy. Edward has always told her if you need me any time any day call me. That would have helped to ease her mind. But at least Bella was able to tell Jasper. That Jasper is a really good guy. Cleaning up the broken glass on the kitchen floor. Making sure Bella doesn't cut her feet by grabbing her slippers. Very sweet.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
OH NOOOooooooo!!!! Call Edward Bella!! Call him now!!!
Reviewer: Ucjackle (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Funny the Way It Is plays at Denny's all the time (I work there part time) and everytime it came on I was like WHAT IS THIS SONG. My friend was like Idk but it's definitely Dave and now I've found it lol. THANKS
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
another great chapter
Reviewer: Tmedward79 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
I am a DIE HARD DMB fan, I agree totally ROBBED!!! I have to disagree about the two best songs on big whiskey..... I love You & Me and Baby Blue...... In fact I think you just made my choice of music for the evening quite simple........
DMB aside, I do love this story...... I love that it seems so different from some of the other stories out there...
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
Is it a dream or a premonition? Great chapter!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
of course she's going to dream about him they are that connected i just hope it's nothing fatal ,i remember her dreaming about the mirrors
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
several great chapters.
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