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Reviews For Turn to Stone
Reviewer: kalgirl30 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

WOW. Love this story and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Hi Nikki, I'm flattered that you're rec'ing my story.  Thank you so much.  I want to read Turn to Stone.  I'm certainly not a wussperv, but trust authors when they warn that a story might be hard to read.  I'm lucky, my life has been touched by neither rape nor suicide, but I'm not sure I can handle the pain.  If I do read it, you'll be the first to know.  Good luck in the Faithful Shipper awards!

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Great Chapter

Reviewer: I Punch Werewolves 4 Fun (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Great update babe.  It was very real, i felt like i wanted to punch james beacuse of what these girls went through. 

The only thing i can say though is.... Edward made a comment questioning who Aro is "Saving his worst for?"  ... That should be easy for Edward to guess.... If i was on James' defense team I would want to go after Charlotte, because she could be unreliable.... BUT being that James' family has money and can easily influence the way the lawyer procedes... I'd go After Bella in order to also make Edward pay for ratting out James

....Anyway, I can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

really exciting chapter; loved it! good work! and thanks for the recommendations!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

I am totally not liking Aro at all.  His evil grin/smirks and cocking his head to the side acting superior.  Really makes me mad.  I was really proud of Maggie she held it together.  So did her dad and I liked his threat.  Her boyfriend Liam foiled Aro's questioning about his anger after the incident.  Also Hillary kept it together as well.  We all know James is as guilty as sin.  Aro's insinuations regarding Maggie infuriates me.  A woman has a right to say "NO" at any time.  A man coming up behind a woman and being violent and threatening is no way consensual sex.  I enjoyed Aro being overruled by badgering Maggie.  Repeatedly asking the same questions over and over again with the wording rearranged.  Actually looking forward to Charlotte getting on the stand and telling it like it happened.  Not one of the girls saw James's face but his DNA will convict his sorry ass.  I hope with the cameras being put up that they will catch these henchmen doing some of their damage to personal property and running people off the road.  From what I have heard as testimony Aro hasn't really built a case for doubt.  A very small window but that will close up with the next couple of testimonies. 

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

great chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

totally forgot to send my actual review.

 

This chapter was beautifully done! I'm really impressed!  It was hard to read for sure, but in a good way.  I really felt like a witness int he courtroom.

 

oh btw, I'm doing a column for The Fan Fic Rebels Blog...check it out sista!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Hey Girl....I'm ending week 14 as of now and i'm in the 2nd trimester....and starting to feel a lil better.

 

You are so sweet to give the shoutout....

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

great chapter

Reviewer: RobstenLuvre (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

That was tough, but essential to be reading. I'd be PISSED beyond words if someone effed with my audi, just like cynthia. i liked how this particular chapter protrayed the victims are strong women, that was really good and empowering to read! can't wait for future chapters, although i now have the feeling that bella is gonna get the worst of the questioning and edward is gonna blow his mind....

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

I really am impressed at how you handled the questioning. Very structural, but enhanced with the sights and emotions that seemed to permeate the room. I can't wait to see where Aro unleashes his vigor.

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

I was so excited about questions, I forgot to leave a review!

I don't know how you do it, but the testimony dialogue is so good.  I who have watched every Perry Mason episode hundreds of times each could not even attempt it.  I am pretty afraid for Bella.  I wonder what Aro and James have planned for her testimony.  How can they twist her testimony to make her look bad?  Compared to Maggie, Bella's been a saint in her life.  She's had no addictions and a fiance.  She didn't indulge in inappropriate behavior.  She's a police chief's daughter, for heavens sake!  Unless they plan to do something before she gets the chance to testify which makes those security cameras they are installing in front of the townhouse entrance a much more important decision in that light.  I wonder what you've got planned...hmmm.

Reviewer: livvi84 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

The lawyer in me can't help but comment about the dismissal of Sue's attack. I practice in New York, so maybe it's possible in the state this story takes place in, but if a Grand Jury determines there is enough evidence for an indictment, then a judge can't dismiss a charge unless significant, previously unknown evidence was found. That's the point of a trial.  Everything else, with the exception of the witnesses hanging out together, seemed accurate, so I was just curious if Washington did give a judge the power to dismiss indictments and whether it was with our without prejudice. I'm not sure how that would be Constitutional, but I was just curious.

Reviewer: sulin0105 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Day Five

i love cynthia! we all need cynthias in our lives.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Ooh, I'm not liking where this is going. I'm a fairytale girl, so I'm holding out for a hope that they'll get their HEA, but right now I don't like smug little Aro at all.

Well done on an amazingly well written (and very compassionate) chapter :)

Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

I suppose he is going to be really hard on Bella, isn't he ? Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

great chapter, your writing always draws me in, I make sure I don't miss a single word.

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Wow that was tough to read but you wrote it sooo well! Everything was very detalied. Thanks soo much for the chapter! So cant wait til the next update!! Your an amazing writer and i really love this story!

Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Wow that was tough to read but you wrote it sooo well! Everything was very detalied. Thanks soo much for the chapter! So cant wait til the next update!! Your an amazing writer and i really love this story!

Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

excellent!very well-written indeed.i half wanted to smack aro myself.

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

Good job. Those women are strong, and I am glad that Edward acknowledged that.

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: bluiqt (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

That was intense!  I think they all answered the questins really well!  I have a feeling Aro is saving the "worse" for Bella :(

Poor Lady B :(

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

It's so strange reading a story that includes the town and drinking holes one knows! I am suprised you didn't add The Bear to the list . It is almost sureral since I can visually see the Crazy Horse and La Salle's - thinking of in my younger days when I went to those places!

You are doing a great job with this story and are handling the subject matter very well.

Defense attorney's are scum. They try to justify but they are scum.

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 42 - Maggie

another great chapter,always look forwrd to the updates

aro in drag...priceless

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